asiatic baby

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Posted by prof. don windrom on October 31, 2006 at 16:37:24:

 2 men violently attemping salvation

 2 men drowning

 2 men denying there destiny

 2 men questioning thee

 and the baby sitting quietly on the boat

 not worried about its salvation

 lingering to the hope that the 2 men will accept the inevitable

 and finally from the baby a simple tear

 and what was clear

 cold and still 33 degrees

 and a soft sensual breeze

 and the drowning of salvation

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