Re: Prevent It

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Posted by doreen peri [ dp AT studioeight DOT tv ]; on July 06, 2006 at 18:10:50:

In Reply to: Prevent It posted by Mechelle A. Kirts on June 07, 2006 at 19:11:19:

ya got the rhyme dynamic thing goin on for sure.

is this a performance piece?

would work best spoken

instead of using / to divide the lines, why don't you just break it into lines? would be easier to read. just an idea..

keep ranting... prevent it!

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