me......in love?


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Posted by prof. don windrom on June 14, 2006 at 11:11:04:

 i still don't understand

 and a very long way from being grand

 damn!

 and she won't unite with me and take my hand

 damn!

 a treacherous adventure over these sands

 all my myself

 half hearted love

 a half filled tub

 me...in love?

 singular not plural though

 slamming the doors

 and the rain just pours

 the pain like aching sores

 like a lion my heart roars

 me....in love?

 

 

 

 

 


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