I Found My Thrill


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Posted by mb apples on March 31, 2006 at 13:16:16:

I realized today that I have never seen
     the hill I see when I hear “hill,” and
     because so, I have trouble believing
     in the existence of any such natural
     structure, though I have seen them before,
     or so I am told.

             I now know what Nietzsche meant.

My hill wobbles between two and three
     dimensions, only showing
     contours with human interaction, which
     has lately proven stressful to my weary
     imagination.

It has two slopes, perfect mirrors of each
    other, juxtaposing one another against
    the cloudless gray canvas. The little black
    traveler, stained with charcoal, appears
    and my ideals of computer design must
    compete with the archaic flatness of the
    “original” in order to provide as much
    reality as possible.

Our solemn traveler reaches the summit
    and the gray sky oscillates from left to
    right until it is satisfied with its view
    of the familiar stranger.

He lays like an angel over the inexplicably
   trimmed lawn that covers the hill’s scalp,
   face wrought with the blank gaze of mental
   escape, most likely climbing the hills associated
   with his very own metaphors.

He raises his finger deficient palms up to
  the Heavens, begging for the weight of
  sincerity to be lifted so that he could slide
  like a slick penguin to the bottom of the
  hill, where he can wallow in insincere interests
  until the Jews decide to convert.

My hill dances with Nietzsche’s metaphors
   along the blank backdrop of the dank gray
   sky as our hopeful little traveler
   melts into the waxy yellow-green earth
   to be recycled and stored for when
   the need for another ascent arises.


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