Re: Edict Against Phoenix


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Posted by PaxPacis on March 04, 2006 at 18:03:07:

In Reply to: Edict Against Phoenix posted by Anaxagoras on February 28, 2006 at 17:36:31:

"The last fence splits, parted lips
articulate the speech of sand, rock, snake, and cloud.
Heat dances the ghost-dance. The city returns
to its intended state: mirage."

Whoa, thank you for writing these lines...and I agree, Desert sounds are better.



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