Re: crack alley blues


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Posted by Nick D on February 16, 2006 at 23:13:51:

In Reply to: crack alley blues posted by prof. don windrom on February 15, 2006 at 15:42:27:

Ah lak da pome, Don da'Wind Rom. Ah lak da way
ya tak 'bout ma hood.

At times, writing about places and people we can only imagine
is like preaching a religion we don't even believe in. I applaud
your entry into such a place as depicted in the alley. I believe
you did a fine job of it and yet, why is it that I don't feel
the force of authenticity? Perhaps that's not necessary for a poem
to be considered real. I've been struggling with this in my own writing.


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