Love Song

Posted by Wil on February 12, 2006 at 00:53:04:

A shared melody tucked
Between the eaves;
A silent song I share with you.

A transparent breath woven
Of extremities
Laid across clouds

These barriers no longer exist
We exist to please:
A song for us both.

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I admit that this is bare bones. I need help identifying themes and etc.