Re: Dark Eyes
Posted by Cora on August 12, 2000 at 05:51:34:
In Reply to: Dark Eyes posted by Genuine on August 11, 2000 at 20:41:18:
I love the ocean metaphore, and the way you carry it through the whole poem. It does get a little long. My favorite line would probably be "I take only my sensitivities".
~ Cori