Re: Not being able to sleep


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Posted by Bob on October 21, 1999 at 01:38:35:

In Reply to: Not being able to sleep posted by Priscilla on October 20, 1999 at 17:31:13:

Pretty clever and creative--if you tinkered around with it,
you could make it even more ingenious. Remember: only you
can control and release the overpowering POWER in your Poem!
I sense there is alot more Power in this Poem that you are
not setting free. Are you aware of the Power in your Poems?




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