Posted by Nick D on October 19, 1999 at 06:56:06:
In Reply to: Poetic Masterbation posted by Angela S. on October 19, 1999 at 06:08:55:
Terrific, Angela, even better than "Sensual Eroticism"
which I liked enough to print out. Having said that,
I think the third stanza needs a line or two to focus the
direction and meaning of the poem. In a sense, you set
the stage, but left me to wonder why. (Hmmm. Is that what I
meant to say?)