Posted by Jazzman on October 12, 1998 at 15:44:37:
In Reply to: Re: more of that jazz posted by Gwenn on October 11, 1998 at 10:52:10:
: Jazzy, although I like your first poem, I must admit this one is much better. Keep up the good work :o) *wink*
I am glad ya liked it Sweets, and where do you live ?
: : I was walkin' along
: : not really anywhere to be going
: : I had nothing to do
: : on this lovely Saturday afternoon
: : the park was crowded as usual
: : for this time of year
: : the rain and heat are over
: : it's the begining of fall
: : people walking
: : talking
: : everywhere
: : I look all around
: : not wanting to stare
: : the beautiful women
: : walk by in droves
: : where did they come from
: : these angelic faces
: : porcelain beauties
: : of fragile graces
: : from far away exotic places?
: : they all are so beautiful to me
: : I don't understand
: : how some can't see
: : that something so grand
: : didn't come from overseas
: : but was born right here in town.
: : I guess it depends on which eye you look out of.
: : 8- )