more of that jazz


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Posted by Jazzman on October 12, 1998 at 15:43:33:

In Reply to: Re: more of that jazz posted by Jason on October 11, 1998 at 11:46:05:

ok Jason, just what do you "think" I am saying
or do you want me to tell you?
*wlg*

: Jazzman,although I liked the humorous twist of your first
: this is a much better poem
: and I like what I think you are saying
: write some more for us


: : I was walkin' along
: : not really anywhere to be going
: : I had nothing to do
: : on this lovely Saturday afternoon
: : the park was crowded as usual
: : for this time of year
: : the rain and heat are over
: : it's the begining of fall
: : people walking
: : talking
: : everywhere
: : I look all around
: : not wanting to stare
: : the beautiful women
: : walk by in droves
: : where did they come from
: : these angelic faces
: : porcelain beauties
: : of fragile graces
: : from far away exotic places?
: : they all are so beautiful to me
: : I don't understand
: : how some can't see
: : that something so grand
: : didn't come from overseas
: : but was born right here in town.

: : I guess it depends on which eye you look out of.
: : 8- )




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