Re: Night Fall


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Posted by A. Brown on October 11, 1998 at 20:32:31:

In Reply to: Re: Night Fall posted by A. Brown on October 11, 1998 at 20:30:58:


nise poetry. you described the night falling vividly.
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: : NIGHT FALL

: : Night fall covers the sky.
: : Shimmering stars emmerse from the heavens.
: : I lie down, close my eyes, and their you appear.
: : I await your visit into my world, my mind.
: : Imagining the voice, the whisper, the breath.
: nice poem. you describe the night fall vividlly.: Your body blankets me so ever softly.
: : I feel the warmth of your embrace.
: : Awaiting the joining of our lips,
: : the caress of my face,
: : the touch of my body.
: : I awaken at the sound of your voice,
: : the touch of your hands.
: : The flesh of your lips touching mine,
: : as night covers the sky.





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