Re: more of that jazz


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Posted by A. Brown on October 11, 1998 at 09:59:07:

In Reply to: more of that jazz posted by Jazzman on October 11, 1998 at 07:13:01:

Vivid description-"these angelic faces, pocelain beauties, of fragile faces". Nice work.
: I was walkin' along
: not really anywhere to be going
: I had nothing to do
: on this lovely Saturday afternoon
: the park was crowded as usual
: for this time of year
: the rain and heat are over
: it's the begining of fall
: people walking
: talking
: everywhere
: I look all around
: not wanting to stare
: the beautiful women
: walk by in droves
: where did they come from
: these angelic faces
: porcelain beauties
: of fragile graces
: from far away exotic places?
: they all are so beautiful to me
: I don't understand
: how some can't see
: that something so grand
: didn't come from overseas
: but was born right here in town.

: I guess it depends on which eye you look out of.
: 8- )




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