Posted by Ruth on February 16, 1999 at 13:41:04:
In Reply to: The day my heart spoke posted by Spud on February 15, 1999 at 22:53:18:
I really liked this poem...up to the line "Fuck my past love crimes". I think that could have used another word and still made as strong of a impact. This poem has a lot of potential. The rythym is good, the rhyme is great...it has a rather good message...my question is...Why did you use that line?