Posted by Ryan on February 15, 1999 at 17:37:24:
In Reply to: June 1998 posted by Sarah... on February 15, 1999 at 15:40:29:
a very nice poem...i really like the ideas your conveying...the line "I would see my own greens and blues" is especially good...however, at the beginning your tense changes back and forth...you might have a reason for that, but it kinda confused me...other than that, i liked it