Posted by philippe on February 08, 1999 at 12:09:46:
In Reply to: Death Metal posted by Atrocifix on February 08, 1999 at 10:58:55:
This fact changes everything. Lyrics are meant to complement the music and as such,
they rarely work by themselves when written down. I would have to hear the song
to then give you a fair opinion. As simply a poem though, it doesn't work- regardless
of what other people tell you.
Phillipe