"First Time Making Love"

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Posted by Donald Windrom on February 08, 1999 at 09:10:37:

First Time making Love

Love swept you away,like the Flood

Jealousy led to bloodshed

Obviousy from Brown to Red

Never wanting to know she's in someone else's bed

We both surely to be doomed by lead

First Time making Love

BLOOD!!!!!!

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