Critic Corner #71
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- Re: Pain - The Outsider 02:01:42 7/09/2005
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- Re: " m " - joel 15:37:15 6/19/2005
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- Re: " m " - myndokter....... 14:42:44 6/20/2005
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- You weren’t content - joel 09:59:38 5/18/2005
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- organized religion and reality - prof. don windrom 17:14:16 5/17/2005
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- Lost - BeneathSanctity 07:28:22 4/18/2005
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- the gutter - prof. don windrom 11:08:07 4/09/2005
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- the late sixties early seventies - prof. don windrom 10:57:27 4/09/2005
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- Untitled - Bjorki 14:09:03 4/01/2005
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- unititled (it's a longer on...something newer for me) - joel 11:49:52 3/30/2005
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- advocate - prof. don windrom 11:33:35 3/30/2005
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- ACDA - Natalie Elisabeth 22:47:04 3/27/2005
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- Re: ACDA - BeneathSanctity 07:38:05 4/18/2005
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- Re: ACDA - Wil 00:55:20 4/17/2005
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- Re: ACDA - Natalie Elisabeth 10:04:22 4/23/2005
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- Poetic imminence - The Duke 04:03:55 3/27/2005
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- White (Re-post) - The Duke 02:08:16 3/26/2005
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- Jealousy - The Duke 23:47:04 3/25/2005
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- Changeling - Pax Pacis 01:59:43 3/25/2005
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- if we must.........die - prof. don windrom 17:41:31 3/24/2005
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- Stain Me With Your Dissective Glance - NoPrinceCharming 18:51:56 3/22/2005
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- Slight Treasure - NoPrinceCharming 18:45:49 3/22/2005
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- revised draft - SanskritPoet 19:15:54 3/17/2005
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- Birds - Miriam Richardson 23:19:54 3/15/2005
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- Re: Birds - Matthew Holweger 10:22:23 3/16/2005
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- The sound of two hands clapping - Miriam Richardson 14:39:16 3/11/2005
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- Hollywood - bernard 13:34:54 3/11/2005
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- the 2PAC thats in me - prof. don windrom 18:31:01 3/10/2005
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- in evers eyes - prof. don windrom 18:22:18 3/10/2005
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- wheatlly and dunbar - prof. don windrom 18:13:24 3/10/2005
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- IF THE WORLD IS A MOVIE, JEFFREY DAHMER IS DIRECTING - SanskritPoet 11:31:20 3/09/2005
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- IF THE WORLD IS A MOVIE, JEFFREY DAHMER IS DIRECTING - SanskritPoet 11:30:50 3/09/2005
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- coke and fear - prof. don windrom 12:57:46 3/06/2005
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- Lost in the Longing of Lust - Matthew Holweger 19:20:20 3/02/2005
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- Envy of the Potters Wheel - Matthew Holweger 19:07:24 3/02/2005
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- This is my infidelity - joel 12:09:36 3/02/2005
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- She wears her hair carefully arranged.... (title?) - doreen peri 12:42:30 2/28/2005
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- illinois - prof. don windrom 16:37:58 2/24/2005
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- 6th street - prof. don windrom 16:29:51 2/24/2005
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- my girl from alabama - prof. don windrom 16:06:18 2/24/2005
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- perfect sadness - prof. don windrom 15:47:03 2/24/2005
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- Mockingbird - Krista 22:26:24 2/23/2005
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- the silent satanic whisper - prof. don windrom 18:49:07 2/22/2005
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- An Allusion Which Makes Sense Only In Theory - elvis on velvet 17:48:31 2/20/2005
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- contributions to the word jam - doreen peri 19:37:09 2/19/2005
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- A glass path reached by moon - Miriam 02:57:11 2/16/2005
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- Sometimes it's not clear to me - doreen peri 22:14:35 2/14/2005
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- The Missing Piece to My Soul - vanilla flame 18:09:07 2/14/2005
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- Valentine's Day - vanilla flame 15:30:48 2/14/2005
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- Anger, Please Don't Result In This - vanilla flame 15:29:20 2/14/2005
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- Homeless - sweetpoison 13:08:25 2/12/2005
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- Eros - doreen peri 11:27:32 2/10/2005
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- wicked - prof. don windrom 16:25:11 2/08/2005
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- beyond the door - prof. don windrom 11:32:22 2/08/2005
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- can u feel me - prof. don windrom 12:04:14 2/07/2005
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- silent virgin - prof. don windrom 11:01:37 2/07/2005
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- love just walked outside - prof. don windrom 10:34:11 2/07/2005
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- in the line of duty - prof. don windrom 10:28:56 2/07/2005
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- lust and insanity - prof. don windrom 10:22:11 2/07/2005
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- these are the words you should never use in poetry - doreen peri 22:37:06 1/29/2005
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- once - HeWhoSlithers 18:29:02 1/29/2005
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- Re: once - Matt Holweger 20:25:28 2/04/2005
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- adrift - de lis 10:30:37 1/24/2005
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- Good Morning - Pappy 14:25:56 1/23/2005
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- tired eyes of a retch - HeWhoSlithers 13:58:09 1/22/2005
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- love letters - doreen peri 21:09:37 1/20/2005
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- timing - PoeticaL 16:14:52 1/16/2005
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- Re: timing - HeWhoSlithers 17:03:03 1/20/2005
(0)
- Re: timing - doreen peri 23:20:27 1/18/2005
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- Re: timing - Alessandra LoSqualo 19:51:16 1/17/2005
(0)
- (and i don't even care that it's a limmerick) - joel 05:50:56 1/16/2005
(1)
- if you can touch type, you can play music - or - LISTS - or - This Drink's on Me - doreen peri 21:28:47 1/14/2005
(5)
- :) - joel 03:29:14 1/15/2005
(4)
- An Elegy of Grace - Alessandra LoSqualo 19:42:55 1/09/2005
(2)
- ... - joel 14:51:49 1/13/2005
(1)
- Re: ... - Alessandra LoSqualo 15:48:44 1/16/2005
(0)
- another side - Sara E. Hamlin 08:23:50 1/09/2005
(1)
- The Bottle - Sara E. Hamlin 08:22:45 1/09/2005
(2)
- The Virgin of Guadaluope - jota 17:55:53 1/08/2005
(2)
- Song of a Misspent Youth - jota 01:53:26 1/08/2005
(9)
- Color My Skin - jota 01:27:35 1/08/2005
(3)
- Emerging - Jennifer Finamore Bockoff 12:22:01 1/07/2005
(1)
- K - bernard 11:45:33 1/07/2005
(0)
- still be friends... - Downside 11:48:41 1/05/2005
(1)
- Staring Twilight Shadows - Downside 11:45:57 1/05/2005
(0)
- love of mine - Sara E. Hamlin 09:17:14 1/05/2005
(0)
- Roses - Sara E. Hamlin 09:16:29 1/05/2005
(1)
- desperation - Downside 07:00:07 1/05/2005
(0)
- I don't recall at all; did I or did - joel 15:21:45 1/04/2005
(1)
- It’s such a classic cocktail: drink is drive. - joel 15:20:07 1/04/2005
(0)
- When fireworks as finished cigarettes - joel 14:42:45 1/01/2005
(0)
- hush - April May 09:32:46 12/31/2004
(3)
- Continuing to pause - Will Wentwhere 09:32:16 12/30/2004
(1)
- If I could paint reality beyond - joel 15:08:59 12/26/2004
(0)
- My First Kiss - Bahaichap 17:31:16 12/24/2004
(1)
- My Life - GEMINI6881 18:34:39 12/20/2004
(1)
- Emotions - Jenz 12:11:43 12/17/2004
(1)
- Forgiveness... - Jenz 12:04:03 12/17/2004
(0)
- a not so graceful exit - Krista 19:12:12 12/14/2004
(2)
- To Make You Understand - WIREMAN 19:09:42 12/11/2004
(0)
- Summer Night In a Graveyard - wilsonx 19:03:52 12/11/2004
(2)
- Ashes, ashes and all fall down - joel 15:21:25 12/09/2004
(2)
- I realize just now - joel 07:46:10 12/07/2004
(0)
- I milked Madonna— - joel 17:19:46 12/06/2004
(2)
- ’cause he’s handsome and she’s pretty - joel 17:17:33 12/06/2004
(0)
- Untitled - GaRdIaN 19:52:20 12/05/2004
(0)
- writers pages featuring j brian long - doreen peri 19:33:07 12/05/2004
(2)
- I wouldn't write a hundred verses in - joel 01:45:05 12/03/2004
(0)
- Ode to McKay - raoul_duke 15:02:57 12/02/2004
(0)
- without him - doreen peri 22:32:36 12/01/2004
(2)
- !!!! - joel 01:43:43 12/03/2004
(1)
- Re: !!!! - doreen peri 12:14:02 12/04/2004
(0)
- One Forever Moment - dan 20:30:59 11/30/2004
(1)
- dripping toward the end - three 06:21:45 11/30/2004
(0)
- How sad that rough ain’t good enough - joel 17:18:47 11/29/2004
(0)
- searching - Krista 19:58:35 11/28/2004
(1)
- My love for you (when honest love) cannot - joel 17:20:27 11/25/2004
(3)
- I wonder: when horizons set from hilltop peaks, - joel 17:16:45 11/25/2004
(0)
- Unworthy of You - Krista 19:22:47 11/23/2004
(2)
- Perhaps they land on yellow feet - joel 15:13:59 11/22/2004
(4)
- Poltergeist Pleasures In “C” flat - iblieve 10:14:45 11/21/2004
(3)
- i place my faith - doreen peri 22:41:42 11/19/2004
(3)
- Butterfly cholesterol - joel 11:52:39 11/19/2004
(0)
- solicitation - doreen peri 20:22:56 11/18/2004
(7)
- I lost you once, but more have found - joel 16:00:54 11/18/2004
(2)
- I pity the little concrete Asian elephant - joel 15:59:49 11/18/2004
(0)
- Untouched by the Storm - Vince Suzadail Jr. 17:49:37 11/17/2004
(2)
- no sentence for your love that I’m aware - joel 11:21:27 11/16/2004
(0)
- The blues don’t sound right outside - joel 10:10:41 11/16/2004
(0)
- Rubber Clown - judih 06:58:39 11/16/2004
(3)
- MaTtEr Of TiMe - GaRdIaN 23:18:48 11/15/2004
(2)
- Single path - GaRdIaN 23:16:46 11/15/2004
(1)
- Set Em Up Joe #3 in C Minor - Lightning Rod 16:56:15 11/15/2004
(5)
- Boat-rowing before Dawn - Breton Heald 02:25:18 11/15/2004
(1)
- Sweet Addiction - raoul_duke 18:31:57 11/14/2004
(2)
- born second son to second wife - joel 16:06:55 11/14/2004
(0)
- Dishonesty and a Telephone - Natalie Elisabeth 20:32:33 11/13/2004
(1)
- I Hope You Die (and go to heaven) - iblieve 09:38:10 11/13/2004
(0)
- Death Of Herself - iblieve 09:33:11 11/13/2004
(0)
- I'm Stickin' To It - Lightning Rod 16:46:27 11/12/2004
(3)
- I’d set my face to excavating Paradise - joel 16:02:52 11/12/2004
(0)
- boss man - aubreshewmake 11:12:25 11/12/2004
(1)
- look at me - aubreshewmake 07:44:52 11/12/2004
(1)
- Stop weeding. All my sweat pours out for rest - joel 01:27:22 11/12/2004
(12)
- Fiction with a trace of arsenic - doreen peri 21:13:36 11/11/2004
(4)
- Bubble - J Brian Long 13:50:49 11/11/2004
(9)
- The clothes you see me wearing - joel 07:56:19 11/11/2004
(1)
- The Vigilante - Bob Allen Elrod 19:32:17 11/10/2004
(1)
- Political Indigestion - JD Forme 10:17:46 11/10/2004
(3)
- When fall is felled by falling snow - joel 16:22:28 11/09/2004
(2)
- Subconscious Regression - Tortured Jester 15:55:45 11/08/2004
(3)
- Nights With The Living Dead - Tortured Jester 15:51:20 11/08/2004
(5)
- edit of Sickening child - GaRdIaN 12:58:21 11/08/2004
(1)
- ThE CoUrSe Of SufFeRiNg - GaRdIaN 12:35:45 11/08/2004
(2)
- Poetry for me ...... - GaRdIaN 12:32:35 11/08/2004
(6)
- Playing With My Best Friends - iblieve 14:24:04 11/07/2004
(2)
- My Dandelion - iblieve 14:19:42 11/07/2004
(4)
- Haiku (Lavender) - Shereamore Rath 19:35:39 11/06/2004
(3)
- Haiku (African) - Shereamore Rath 19:34:32 11/06/2004
(3)
- True: I ain’t got no masturbation muse— - joel 10:23:35 11/06/2004
(3)
- now - doreen peri 22:05:49 11/05/2004
(7)
- Be cousins still, Aunt Hagar cries— (Sleep well, Mr Arafat) - joel 11:41:50 11/05/2004
(2)
- Wasted - raoul_duke 21:47:45 11/04/2004
(1)
- Scripture Whipped - Dandylion 20:42:03 11/04/2004
(4)
- Babies Breath - Dandylion 20:38:08 11/04/2004
(5)
- Fairytale Lies - iblieve 13:47:05 11/04/2004
(16)
- In public men’s rooms, in restrooms—rest rooms (these three postings explore ideas together; i have a birthday coming up and i guess i'm just thinking about actually joining the adult world eventually) - joel 09:04:08 11/04/2004
(6)
- there blows the wind - joel 08:57:52 11/04/2004
(3)
- I can't grow a decent beard - joel 08:48:27 11/04/2004
(2)
- She Doesn't Like The Sun - iblieve 08:09:55 11/04/2004
(6)
- I told me I wasn't enough - joel 15:10:03 11/03/2004
(1)
- multi-partison election day heiku (i know, i know...heikus are lame, but oh well....) - joel 14:42:58 11/02/2004
(3)
- Little Napoleon, get out of my life. - joel 11:23:55 11/02/2004
(1)
- 1666 - J Brian Long 05:37:01 11/02/2004
(4)
- Re: 1666 - iblieve 13:58:35 11/04/2004
(1)
- Re: 1666 - J Brian Long 15:41:13 11/04/2004
(0)
- Re: 1666 - joel 10:03:03 11/04/2004
(1)
- Re: 1666 - J Brian Long 15:27:36 11/04/2004
(0)
- Words Like Knifes To Rip Your Tight Ass Minds Apart - iblieve 15:38:22 11/01/2004
(4)
- Untitled - GaRdIaN 13:59:34 10/31/2004
(7)
- I xerox now and now and now—and xerox now again. - joel 14:42:32 10/30/2004
(4)
- Frailty - JD Forme 11:32:01 10/25/2004
(6)
- War of Words - Kamil 09:07:48 10/24/2004
(1)
- The guilt of a nation - PJ 22:33:46 10/23/2004
(1)
- Afterthought - Shereamore Rath 07:09:33 10/23/2004
(5)
- If You Despise Me - markusfrenzy 15:51:17 10/22/2004
(1)
- my relationship to myself is incestuous. - doreen peri 21:06:46 10/20/2004
(4)
- Strange Place - SyntheticDivine 13:39:28 10/20/2004
(2)
- Visions Of Jesus Christ Singing In A Band - iblieve 11:41:22 10/18/2004
(3)
- Chaff in the Wind - JD Forme 06:03:43 10/18/2004
(2)
- From My Bed - PJ 23:41:23 10/16/2004
(5)
- Fear - doreen peri 22:03:35 10/15/2004
(1)
- Re: Fear - iblieve 17:20:43 11/01/2004
(0)
- Tear Vase - markusfrenzy 15:03:05 10/15/2004
(1)
- 5 years down - raoul_duke 10:22:56 10/15/2004
(2)
- Little Girls Do Stupid Things - Dandylion 08:15:08 10/15/2004
(3)
- Yesterday - markusfrenzy 11:06:02 10/14/2004
(1)
- Calling all Narnians - JD Forme 07:02:23 10/14/2004
(3)
- Dearly Loved - raoul_duke 18:12:54 10/13/2004
(1)
- Stale Sex and Heroin - iblieve 12:06:11 10/12/2004
(5)
- My Four Corners - raoul_duke 18:44:18 10/11/2004
(1)
- So, so long ago did I hear you last (Doreen's challenge) - joel 14:39:38 10/11/2004
(1)
- love letters in the steam (doreens challenge) - PJ 06:29:56 10/11/2004
(2)
- The Thin White Line - raoul_duke 22:50:57 10/10/2004
(1)
- I just took life to quiet, quiet sleep - joel 14:05:41 10/10/2004
(2)
- They’re starless nights whose beauty is most vivid - joel 15:25:01 10/09/2004
(1)
- Aesthetics - Sin 21:30:57 10/08/2004
(0)
- Truth - Sin 21:09:04 10/08/2004
(2)
- Blind - Sin 21:07:03 10/08/2004
(1)
- First time in the forest - JD Forme 05:29:21 10/08/2004
(2)
- I Smoke Cigarettes - Adam Demian McLean 00:39:27 10/06/2004
(0)
- An Accommodating Homeopathic Impulse - Adam Demian McLean 00:17:04 10/06/2004
(1)
- Eclipse - PJ 11:00:52 10/05/2004
(2)
- Poem for PJ - Adam Demian McLean 01:18:11 10/06/2004
(1)
- imagine your face turned into fireworks - dada homage - Adam Demian McLean 21:05:36 10/04/2004
(0)
- We All Miss the Angels - Adam Demian McLean 20:33:03 10/04/2004
(2)
- shoe choice - doreen peri 17:48:45 10/04/2004
(7)
- Cloaked - Nan 19:35:55 10/03/2004
(5)
- we - PoeticaL 09:42:05 10/02/2004
(1)
- Re: we - joel 12:54:05 10/10/2004
(0)
- The Body - Sara E. Hamlin 15:20:41 10/01/2004
(0)
- all that we have - PJ 19:29:06 9/30/2004
(0)
- whisper of a stranger - PJ 19:18:52 9/30/2004
(0)
- aint got nothin to say - Stephanie Hawkins 18:49:20 9/30/2004
(2)
- Art Lovers - JD Forme 06:03:51 9/29/2004
(2)
- I burned my eyes; the first time ever I saw you rising— - joel 15:55:31 9/28/2004
(0)
- Water falls louder in absolute quiet - joel 12:38:19 9/28/2004
(1)
- Escape is Silly - Adam Demian McLean 17:24:04 9/27/2004
(2)
- Fragile Heart - Sara E. Hamlin 13:24:57 9/27/2004
(2)
- Nothing Smiles - Adam Demian McLean 19:46:11 9/26/2004
(1)
- shadow answer - doreen peri 19:42:24 9/24/2004
(6)
- Re: shadow answer - Sara E. Hamlin 06:13:21 9/28/2004
(1)
- #2 - doreen peri 21:18:16 9/24/2004
(3)
- I just danced tonight with a young married woman - joel 16:27:45 9/24/2004
(3)
- As If - JD Forme 13:40:25 9/24/2004
(5)
- Escape Into The Dark - Sara E. Hamlin 20:14:57 9/22/2004
(0)
- A day in the life (of) - wintyrain 14:56:35 9/20/2004
(0)
- Golden Mary, standing saint on her mountain - joel 12:59:00 9/20/2004
(2)
- Thoughts Provoked - wintyrain 16:19:38 9/19/2004
(2)
- colores - joel 12:54:28 9/20/2004
(1)
- And have slain the Jabberwock, you pose? - joel 15:51:45 9/17/2004
(3)
- breakfast served up flat - doreen peri 20:37:58 9/16/2004
(0)
- Fucked Today? - Lightning Rod 18:48:42 9/16/2004
(0)
- karma - doreen peri 12:21:20 9/16/2004
(1)
- Re: karma - Lightning Rod 18:50:00 9/16/2004
(0)
- Ground Zero - bernard 14:16:42 9/12/2004
(1)
- Itinerant Farm Worker - marcell 11:57:49 9/08/2004
(0)
- death by love - mad prophet 07:15:52 9/08/2004
(0)
- A Quarter Century...No Quarter for My Soul - marcell 00:20:22 9/07/2004
(0)
- LauraLee - marcell 00:08:24 9/07/2004
(0)
- Escape From Depession's Prison - marcell 20:51:52 9/06/2004
(0)
- Cats in the Willows - marcell 20:32:05 9/06/2004
(0)
- Hawk and the Lady - ideas - DavePage 16:59:01 9/05/2004
(2)
- disconnected - PoeticaL 22:15:31 9/03/2004
(1)
- Methamphetamine Blues #1 - #3 - Adam Demian McLean 09:27:22 9/02/2004
(1)
- Dust of God - JD Forme 04:24:42 9/02/2004
(0)
- One Perfect Note - Dennis Greene 08:33:33 9/01/2004
(0)
- And? - Matthew D'Abate 23:55:17 8/29/2004
(1)
- Re: And? - Adam Demian McLean 17:19:44 9/27/2004
(0)
- I Am A Hack - Matthew D'Abate 23:53:50 8/29/2004
(3)
- On Making It - Matthew D'Abate 23:51:25 8/29/2004
(0)
- Oedipus - Dennis Greene 10:34:22 8/29/2004
(5)
- love isn't like this - PoeticaL 11:05:25 8/28/2004
(2)
- I Thought Someone Out There Would Have the Answer - Adam Demian McLean 22:05:42 8/27/2004
(1)
- Here be dragons - Dennis Greene 22:22:26 8/26/2004
(2)
- Happy Death Day - softpoet 13:41:19 8/26/2004
(1)
- truest - PoeticaL 17:51:07 8/25/2004
(2)
- Peaceable Kingdom - Dante Gabriel Rossetti 17:02:53 8/25/2004
(2)
- The Poet Murders - Dante Gabriel Rossetti 16:51:28 8/25/2004
(1)
- ASHAMED - CHAYO 16:52:54 8/24/2004
(1)
- Esto articulo està dedicado - CHAYO 16:47:17 8/24/2004
(0)
- Earth is a Ball of Clay - bonedaddy 08:16:29 8/24/2004
(0)
- Ophelia - Dennis Greene 10:59:15 8/22/2004
(0)
- Corrida de Toros - bernard 09:15:19 8/22/2004
(2)
- Time-For-Rhymes-A-Dime - Sin 07:54:03 8/20/2004
(0)
- Soldier Anson - Sin 07:51:00 8/20/2004
(2)
- Walking on Water - J Brian Long 15:51:48 8/17/2004
(13)
- Fragile - JD Forme 09:14:59 8/13/2004
(1)
- upon awaking next to an empty pillow - de lis 01:17:43 8/11/2004
(2)
- a little melodramatic for a tuesday night - de lis 01:08:54 8/11/2004
(0)
- No Money to bury murdered brother - CHAYO 07:59:50 8/10/2004
(0)
- love shows - PoeticaL 16:34:22 8/09/2004
(2)
- What You Want To See - JD Forme 08:16:38 8/09/2004
(1)
- Always - PJ 23:25:30 8/08/2004
(4)
- The Letter - PJ 23:05:53 8/08/2004
(0)
- Reality - PoeticaL 12:05:30 8/08/2004
(4)
- Loving observer - mad prophet 09:44:36 8/05/2004
(4)
- Imagine - JD Forme 07:41:41 8/05/2004
(1)
- Rape - Jessie 01:25:36 8/05/2004
(0)
- Another Chance - Jessie 00:44:59 8/05/2004
(0)
- Wanting her more - Jessie 00:40:51 8/05/2004
(0)
- 400 Channels of Thought - JNeal 18:14:37 8/02/2004
(1)
- When Paper Cutters Tame The Dragons - PJ 17:00:36 7/27/2004
(0)
- Youth - PJ 16:56:13 7/27/2004
(0)
- Night Is Not a Graceless Thing - J Brian Long 16:56:10 7/27/2004
(4)
- Fire Flower - crystal 17:00:48 7/26/2004
(0)
- bernard shakey - Ryan 23:34:45 7/23/2004
(1)
- Malcontent - David Lawrence 23:02:29 7/21/2004
(0)
- the almost dying month - crystal 14:38:33 7/21/2004
(5)
- Raising Words - Thom 09:33:39 7/20/2004
(3)
- Hot Grimace - cb 16:39:52 7/19/2004
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