Critic Corner #66
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- Who's knocking at the door? - Miriam 14:34:15 3/14/2002
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- in a dream.... - PoeticaL 12:49:09 3/14/2002
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- Blow - The Duke 11:38:29 3/14/2002
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- NightDreamer (Revised) - Simple 11:24:55 3/14/2002
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- something for him, the one with big feet! Real feet that is - SEASONED BEANS 10:29:29 3/14/2002
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- Something special from the getto - Aubrey Dunkin 08:45:20 3/14/2002
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- A pamphlet - GP 23:08:41 3/13/2002
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- 25 loose living or sick - Powered juicy fruit 19:05:25 3/13/2002
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- Drops of water for Night time revealing - Copy kat Thief w/ clear complexion 17:50:15 3/13/2002
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- Inaugurate Mist - Bar Code 66 15:07:27 3/13/2002
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- Purity of a frustrating day - Crown Royal 13:02:14 3/13/2002
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- Seven Large Pots Planted For insisted topics on Heavy Metals Translations in LTD - Anna Burt's 12:41:11 3/13/2002
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- At Last (a cinquain) - Debbie 11:59:45 3/13/2002
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- midnight - Rose 10:34:02 3/13/2002
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- Lazy - Aubrey Dunkin 10:16:25 3/13/2002
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- Re: Lazy - Crown Royal 13:04:19 3/13/2002
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- fervency - Seasoned beans 09:23:04 3/13/2002
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- On the edge of the sun light - Seasoned beans 08:49:16 3/13/2002
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- Latter up for you - Crown royal 23:26:21 3/12/2002
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- Paces and mover's - Anna Burts 22:53:07 3/12/2002
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- The Electrical dying fields - Anna Burts 22:41:44 3/12/2002
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- Crocus Sativus - Organ 20:58:10 3/12/2002
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- 8 inches thinking thick - Vincent 20:43:32 3/12/2002
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- Am- A Retto - Organs 20:28:55 3/12/2002
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- Pieces - Debbie 17:28:18 3/12/2002
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- poem 62 - J 13:28:19 3/12/2002
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- poem 4 - J 13:21:32 3/12/2002
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- Surface Understandings - Aubrey Dunkin 11:28:55 3/12/2002
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- Come with me - Crow. s 22:17:23 3/11/2002
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- Guilty - Debbie 21:20:17 3/11/2002
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- If I had any answers I would be????????? - ESP 21:19:08 3/11/2002
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- NightDreamer - Simple 20:04:24 3/11/2002
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- March - a. waverly 15:53:00 3/11/2002
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- Re: March - Aubrey Dunkin 11:14:31 3/12/2002
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- Sowing down - Bacon Bits 12:55:00 3/11/2002
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- Insigh to my new side - Avenue Derville 12:30:10 3/11/2002
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- Romantic needs - Carson Bailey 11:04:18 3/11/2002
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- The correct spelling - Aubrey Dunkin 10:22:36 3/11/2002
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- subconscious basement torment running free - Softpoet 03:02:40 3/11/2002
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- EpiGloTTis - Simple 02:41:39 3/11/2002
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- Life of Fire - Simple 02:33:15 3/11/2002
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- Sunday hat full of rain..p.s. when days are rotten I... - Miriam 18:25:22 3/10/2002
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- Sunday hat full of rain..p.s. when days are rotten I... - Miriam 18:14:16 3/10/2002
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- My pet Toad 4th revision - Same Author 16:20:49 3/10/2002
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- The shadow dancer ........Died in her sleep - Sandy Perious 14:36:36 3/10/2002
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- knock knock knock...access denied - Krista 13:15:54 3/10/2002
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- LCP Solution a remarkable Treatment for ADHD - Bacon Bits 10:37:40 3/10/2002
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- Virtue in my soul - Total Acccess 10:25:38 3/10/2002
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- Liquid Spiders - No Name Yellow Wonder 09:03:48 3/10/2002
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- For my best friend Marcia - Penta Super Pro 00:06:23 3/10/2002
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- Previous Majic desk - Miriam 14:58:35 3/09/2002
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- The majic desk in the middle of the nest - Miriam 14:50:44 3/09/2002
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- jubilee - don windrom 13:47:05 3/09/2002
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- crap,crap - O.2.B.U 12:49:33 3/09/2002
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- Sara Lee pound mini cake's - Purpose 08:51:39 3/09/2002
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- our holocaust - don windrom 08:39:36 3/09/2002
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- Hang nails - a toxin ourworn or perhaps reactive - One of the council memebers 08:16:08 3/09/2002
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- The Copy - kirsys 08:05:49 3/09/2002
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- Re: The Copy - eatting corn flakes for a change 08:17:56 3/09/2002
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- countdown towards nuclear confrontation - Donald Windrom Phd Emeritus 07:21:10 3/09/2002
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- tunnel vision - don windrom 07:10:34 3/09/2002
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- positut'ly nothin' - boat 05:02:08 3/09/2002
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- Dormant DNA - LEAVING TRACKs 01:57:36 3/09/2002
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- Pyramid Worker - Simple 23:40:06 3/08/2002
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- A Mindless Theory - Simple 23:29:47 3/08/2002
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- Battle Field Mentalia - Lyka not normal 21:37:28 3/08/2002
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- Incopatible with my self - Cabaret 19:51:17 3/08/2002
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- Untitled-2-27-02 - Starling Lynn 14:41:59 3/08/2002
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- My pet just for fun- 3rd revision - Kathleen 14:13:03 3/08/2002
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- Afire And Void In a Nameless Poem - Softpoet 13:02:41 3/08/2002
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- For HIm with the big cartoon on his face - Aubrey Dunkin 11:00:35 3/08/2002
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- the anti christ image of himself - don windrom 10:57:56 3/08/2002
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- Lightning feeds the corn, birth on the Mesa."Every single thing is changing in this world....yet..the moon goes on shining." Saigyo - Miriam 10:39:25 3/08/2002
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- Inspired by some one I WILL NEVer meet "thanks" - Telo-mere 08:57:02 3/08/2002
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- -Blind Fingers- - SirOnno 08:01:42 3/08/2002
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- Tell me your one thing. - denzil 01:47:02 3/08/2002
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- Open Your Eyes... - hmm 00:27:45 3/08/2002
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- Reflections of oddity - Lyka not normal 17:37:24 3/07/2002
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- Rose tinted remembrances - a. waverly 16:43:37 3/07/2002
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- u want me to lick you... - don windrom 15:25:05 3/07/2002
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- inner strength - don windrom 15:19:09 3/07/2002
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- the bushwacker - don windrom 15:07:51 3/07/2002
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- at the piano - don windrom 15:01:28 3/07/2002
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- she invited me too lunch - don windrom 14:06:20 3/07/2002
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- hot simmering sex in siberia - don windrom 13:54:17 3/07/2002
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- I shall Overcome - Lee Warshawsky 12:22:30 3/07/2002
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- Melancholia no more - Aubrey Dunkin 11:50:23 3/07/2002
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- Missing Lints - Aubrey Dunkin 11:18:16 3/07/2002
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- First year's - Bacon Bits 10:56:19 3/07/2002
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- Jack Karoak scares me - Iron Paws 21:03:37 3/06/2002
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- Soft pleasures - Miriam 20:11:55 3/06/2002
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- Sheepies - Lyka not normal 19:09:18 3/06/2002
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- hardships of peace - don windrom 18:42:32 3/06/2002
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- Escape, never will - Hardly breathing 18:28:48 3/06/2002
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- Escape, never will - Hardly breathing 18:26:07 3/06/2002
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- Presence inside - Hardly breathing 18:25:38 3/06/2002
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- the devil takes the stand in his own defense - don windrom 18:12:25 3/06/2002
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- sticky situation - don windrom 18:00:26 3/06/2002
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- Home made sweet moans - Frank Albert Johnson 17:41:30 3/06/2002
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- the dialogue with the dike - don windrom 17:28:27 3/06/2002
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- Costumes and Escapes - a. waverly 15:38:10 3/06/2002
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- Bio Balance - Bacon Bits 15:19:09 3/06/2002
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- For My Beloved - His Beast - Carson 10:03:41 3/06/2002
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- Responsibility To Willma Evert Amber - Frank Albert Johnson 23:02:42 3/05/2002
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- PoeticaL - Your Name 22:40:50 3/05/2002
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- Raw- Hide Heroines - Fancy Roper - Hazel May Jane 20:17:50 3/05/2002
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- Sitting at a Cafe with Despair - Iron Paws 20:01:19 3/05/2002
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- NEWS ON THE WAR - Carson 19:59:33 3/05/2002
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- untitled - Queen Of The Damned 16:27:40 3/05/2002
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- You Are Like the Peach - Shereamore Rath 08:30:56 3/05/2002
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- If only I were a pussy - GP 06:17:21 3/05/2002
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- If only I were a pussy - GP 06:16:54 3/05/2002
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- In like a lion ...weather contol? - Miriam 00:33:15 3/05/2002
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- Forgiveness - Carson 21:25:14 3/04/2002
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- untitled - taylor hudson 21:00:40 3/04/2002
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- thoughts at four am - thudson 20:56:13 3/04/2002
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- Perfection in hell - swallowing the pain 20:22:42 3/04/2002
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- Wild Ride in a Mountain Meadow - Miriam 14:34:20 3/04/2002
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- towards dallas sunrise - taylor 13:22:47 3/04/2002
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- towards dallas sunrise - taylor 13:22:23 3/04/2002
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- dallas sunrise - taylor 13:15:30 3/04/2002
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- untouched - taylor 13:10:58 3/04/2002
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- dred's story - don windrom 15:20:54 3/03/2002
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- Ardor - Softpoet 14:14:08 3/03/2002
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- doomsday clock - don windrom 13:58:23 3/03/2002
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- Washing in the Sunday Morning..Zen Soap - Miriam 12:51:22 3/03/2002
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- poem 37(questions) - J 22:02:15 3/02/2002
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- poem 73 - J 21:50:17 3/02/2002
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- Spies of Mesa - rwinte82 14:48:20 3/01/2002
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- Gnostic damnation - Mad Prophet 12:24:21 2/28/2002
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- silencing love - Rachel 17:49:01 2/27/2002
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- drenched insanity - RM 17:27:44 2/27/2002
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- taste of a memory - RM 17:23:26 2/27/2002
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- Fires - Hayley 16:28:23 2/27/2002
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- the Rain - yoyoy 16:22:19 2/27/2002
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- Moon crossed lovers... - A hopeful watcher 16:03:23 2/27/2002
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- the Rain - yoyoy 15:56:25 2/27/2002
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- Another verse in vain - *jcda* 15:20:41 2/27/2002
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- poem 91 - J 17:36:55 2/26/2002
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- poem 6 - J 17:25:21 2/26/2002
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- poem 72 - J 17:14:34 2/26/2002
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- The Night My Dad Went Home - Debra Strouse 15:09:24 2/26/2002
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- Born (this takes it back to good ol 94) - DragonFly 13:27:23 2/26/2002
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- Dawning Of Birth (my soul to you) - Softpoet 13:05:18 2/26/2002
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- i forget - Krista 19:41:52 2/25/2002
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- Haiku (Winter) - Shereamore Rath 17:04:36 2/25/2002
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- bizzare lies (part2) - don windrom 08:21:10 2/25/2002
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- the saddest day of my life - don windrom 07:40:26 2/25/2002
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- Sunday Madness Dirge ...the spine is tapping out cowboy songs - Miriam 15:26:54 2/24/2002
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- The Day He Died for Me - Debra Strouse 14:28:32 2/24/2002
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- its midnight again - Krista 23:06:34 2/23/2002
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- Three small poems written to the sounds of the Estonian Choir not a translation - Miriam 12:50:15 2/23/2002
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- Framing Hands - SirOnno 07:30:18 2/23/2002
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- Torture Of The Rose >>>>>>> - Starling LynnCameron my imaginary mub says hi(so maybe thats dumb) 20:38:10 2/22/2002
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- Torture Of The Rose >>>>>>> - Starling LynnCameron my imaginary mub says hi(so maybe thats dumb) 20:37:31 2/22/2002
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- Finesse - SirOnno 17:29:49 2/22/2002
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- unbreathing life - Rachel 16:12:12 2/22/2002
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- Gone - Softpoet 10:55:39 2/22/2002
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- again - kris (aka spam) 00:57:06 2/22/2002
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- User friendly - Robert Morgan 21:36:30 2/21/2002
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- Trees - Sara E. Hamlin 18:20:55 2/21/2002
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- One Stone (Reworked) - SirOnno 16:52:27 2/21/2002
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- rub me raw - Rachel 15:49:29 2/21/2002
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- the tangled web - don windrom 14:19:59 2/21/2002
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- writing the blues - don windrom 14:15:09 2/21/2002
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- winter in the summer - don windrom 13:05:01 2/21/2002
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- u2 - don windrom 12:57:36 2/21/2002
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- Re: u2 - Rachel 13:22:02 2/21/2002
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- Re: u2 - don windrom 14:21:30 2/21/2002
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- you dont need to play with me - lily 12:17:50 2/21/2002
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- beyond the surface - Sara E. Hamlin 12:01:08 2/21/2002
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- WhItE & BlAcK - blue on BLACK 10:58:51 2/21/2002
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- Q - blue on black 10:56:02 2/21/2002
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- FaIL - Gardian 10:49:52 2/21/2002
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- You - Rachel 09:43:52 2/21/2002
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- Northern Ireland (the kids perspective) - don windrom 08:26:39 2/21/2002
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- the middle east - don windrom 08:20:44 2/21/2002
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- Africa - don windrom 08:16:50 2/21/2002
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- Asia - don windrom 08:06:05 2/21/2002
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- mommy the monster - don windrom 07:48:37 2/21/2002
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- Bitter Winter of our discontent - Miriam 17:20:50 2/20/2002
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- Mother Earth - *jcda* 16:10:34 2/20/2002
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- My Maria - SirOnno 17:07:42 2/19/2002
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- poem 76(my world) - J 16:53:01 2/19/2002
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- poem 39 - J 16:45:06 2/19/2002
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- poem 55 - J 16:34:56 2/19/2002
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- The Divine Shines at Least Once at the Bottom of Punch Bowl Ponderings - Softpoet 14:54:59 2/19/2002
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- Pride and Death 0f Calanthropia - Softpoet 14:34:43 2/19/2002
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- Rape - Rachel 14:22:19 2/19/2002
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- Rage of Lust - Rachel 14:12:17 2/19/2002
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- Before - PoeticaL 13:08:49 2/19/2002
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- This Wasn't My Plan - katienoel 10:40:31 2/19/2002
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- i painted hearts.... - doreen peri 05:51:17 2/19/2002
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- Sense Me... - The Duke 02:22:52 2/19/2002
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- my shrink - don windrom 16:57:25 2/18/2002
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- hehe - doreen peri 06:32:34 2/19/2002
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- Prune away deadwood, trimming and clean up..Poetry Garden - Miriam 16:54:12 2/18/2002
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- the effects of radical reconstruction - don windrom ph'd 13:02:57 2/18/2002
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- weapons of mass destruction - don windrom 12:53:44 2/18/2002
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- Pope Donilius the First Message to the World - don windrom 12:37:30 2/18/2002
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- Pope Donilius the First Message to the World - don windrom 12:29:45 2/18/2002
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- Pope Donilius the First Message to the World - don windrom 12:29:44 2/18/2002
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- Pope Donilius the First Message to the World - don windrom 12:29:43 2/18/2002
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- orgy in the mortuary - don windrom 12:25:18 2/18/2002
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- thats a devil damned lie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - don windrom 12:12:17 2/18/2002
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- Falling in Love With My Muze-ic - TV lifE 21:44:58 2/17/2002
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- Scream From Inside - Softpoet 19:59:00 2/17/2002
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- poem 7 - J 13:56:17 2/17/2002
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- Re: poem 7 - Krista 19:32:04 2/25/2002
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- wait... - doreen peri 06:47:29 2/19/2002
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- Right side Left side Brain empty trash day - Miriam 13:30:29 2/17/2002
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- Untitled - David E. Thompson 13:20:07 2/17/2002
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- Assisi - Maria 11:22:41 2/17/2002
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- Soda Speak - SirOnno 10:56:52 2/17/2002
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- Little prejudices - Miriam 23:14:17 2/16/2002
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- the group - doshari 15:01:07 2/16/2002
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- Urban Poetry - janie 13:32:19 2/16/2002
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- Unmentioned - SirOnno 09:05:50 2/16/2002
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- Dawnless Night - SirOnno 08:02:00 2/16/2002
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- Envious Green - Rachel 15:17:54 2/15/2002
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- Extreme Red - Rachel 15:12:06 2/15/2002
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- Lustful penance - Mad Prophet 13:43:45 2/15/2002
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- I never want to change - Kelsey 07:02:43 2/15/2002
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- Light falls short of something ( need help on finish) - Steve 19:03:34 2/14/2002
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- One of those days... - priyanicole 17:56:34 2/14/2002
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- Touch of Heat - Rachel 16:38:22 2/14/2002
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- How Stupid Are We? (comments please!) - Eneri 16:07:14 2/14/2002
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- Letter to Emily - Miriam 15:03:37 2/14/2002
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- The Holy 4 - Denzil 14:04:36 2/14/2002
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- Greatness - denzil 13:58:05 2/14/2002
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- Notebook (Cheap Paper) - Wil 13:03:00 2/14/2002
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- A Mindless Theory - Simple 08:00:53 2/14/2002
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- The fun side of vertigo - Simple 07:40:55 2/14/2002
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- Pyramid Worker - Simple 07:11:49 2/14/2002
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- For the wind - somebody somewhere 06:27:43 2/14/2002
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- Sex in the Garden - Miriam 17:23:09 2/13/2002
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- afterschool games - janie 15:55:16 2/13/2002
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- Strange Seasons (repost) - Softpoet 15:31:05 2/13/2002
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- Jealousy, Pain, and Envy..... - Twilight Relvelry 10:22:20 2/13/2002
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- And You Wonder - Starling Lynn 19:01:29 2/12/2002
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- Heartburn - for VALENTINE'S DAY - Suicide Blonde 17:59:23 2/12/2002
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- The sounds of Poetry - Miriam 15:37:39 2/12/2002
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- A Sonnet for "Daddy"( this is the way he signed the Christmas Card) - Miriam 15:20:57 2/12/2002
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- die nigga die!!!!! - don windrom 08:11:48 2/12/2002
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- burn baby burn - don windrom 08:08:02 2/12/2002
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- wish i had - kris (formerly known as spam) 20:18:21 2/11/2002
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- Sabishii Hidenka - Pixie 19:27:30 2/11/2002
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- I know. (please comment for the love of god.) - Jada the Fish 19:33:11 2/10/2002
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- To Awake And Dream Inside The Dead Mainstream - Downside 17:49:34 2/10/2002
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- From Stressed To Desserts - PetesPoems 19:35:31 2/09/2002
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- From Stressed To Desserts - PetesPoems 19:34:32 2/09/2002
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- Dancing With Butterfly Angels - Softpoet 12:51:58 2/09/2002
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- a revival of sorts - faded 23:12:45 2/08/2002
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- America - Eneri 20:55:08 2/08/2002
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- the eavesdroppers - don windrom 10:49:48 2/08/2002
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- Fogwalk dreaming in Weather (Tanka Chain) correct placement - Miriam 16:40:26 2/07/2002
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- Fogwalk dreaming in Weather (Tanka Chain) - Miriam 16:32:40 2/07/2002
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- Book of Mirrors - Simple 12:41:53 2/07/2002
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- Epiglottis - Simple 12:36:35 2/07/2002
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- counter culture - don windrom 08:43:28 2/07/2002
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- the new society - don windrom 08:34:20 2/07/2002
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- bizzare lies - don windrom 08:28:30 2/07/2002
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- Radical Illusion - don windrom 08:16:40 2/07/2002
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- do I deserve this - don windrom 08:07:02 2/07/2002
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- jimi and janice - don windrom 08:01:14 2/07/2002
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- When She Enters - Rose 22:51:24 2/06/2002
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- 5 short poems - Hooman Shahkar 15:19:50 2/06/2002
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- Bubble - Don't 05:17:06 2/06/2002
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- Efil lifE - Pete Smothers 21:24:32 2/05/2002
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- ambilical cord - Hayley 21:10:06 2/05/2002
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- Don't eat stars - Hayley 20:33:35 2/05/2002
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- Life - tbraulel4e 20:29:26 2/05/2002
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- Re: Life - Krista 21:21:35 2/08/2002
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- Re: Life - Hayley 20:58:08 2/05/2002
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- secrets - janie 19:10:31 2/05/2002
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- norman - William Bryant Rozier 19:07:00 2/05/2002
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- angel - victoria 18:28:45 2/05/2002
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- Hooked ((I need feedback)) - Chinatown 17:53:22 2/05/2002
(2)
- goodbye - Steve 14:18:14 2/05/2002
(2)
- proliferation - don windrom 13:44:53 2/05/2002
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- Where I've lived, been,sinned (crusade of the chaoticly insane) - Softpoet 13:44:10 2/05/2002
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- u me and she - don windrom 13:23:30 2/05/2002
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- Door mat - Mad Prophet 12:21:41 2/05/2002
(2)
- Different Rain - PoeticaL 11:42:52 2/04/2002
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- The Woman I Am - Rose 21:58:30 2/03/2002
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- Forest of Memories - Rose 21:25:55 2/03/2002
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- So Much Is Dying - me 10:14:01 2/03/2002
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- Smell Of Death - Diddy 10:03:21 2/03/2002
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- Love Me - Maslow 23:28:54 2/02/2002
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- Screaming Whispers - WindFury 19:23:12 2/02/2002
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- like a whisper - Dee 10:23:40 2/02/2002
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- Erase - Hayley 02:24:17 2/02/2002
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- potato chip - William Bryant Rozier 20:24:52 2/01/2002
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- *Seriously Untitled* - Starling Lynn 20:04:12 2/01/2002
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- impossible love - R 17:29:23 2/01/2002
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- Poetry - Mad Prophet 12:21:53 2/01/2002
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- Ancient Hopi an inner sonnet for Corn Maiden - Miriam 18:04:13 1/31/2002
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- Joe - Steve 15:32:47 1/31/2002
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- Re: Joe - Lynn 18:02:54 2/01/2002
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- When Dusk Turns To Morning - Andrea 23:07:57 1/30/2002
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- why can't everything feel as good as taking a piss? - faded 22:42:22 1/30/2002
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- devastation - faded 22:34:29 1/30/2002
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- 4 a.m. - faded 22:05:52 1/30/2002
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- Untitled - Starling Lynn 17:29:15 1/30/2002
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- capa'soul - don windrom 16:40:10 1/30/2002
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- The goodie drawer (a poem inspired by men) - DragonFly 11:43:42 1/30/2002
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- escapism - colin pierce 16:00:13 1/29/2002
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- the patriot and the ram - don windrom 15:09:56 1/29/2002
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- Tragedies Night - Edith d. Eutsler 12:02:12 1/29/2002
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- Broken - Temper Tantrum 08:19:55 1/29/2002
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- The Peace of Death - Moe 14:00:03 1/28/2002
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- The Secret Room - Skyra 20:55:55 1/27/2002
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- Page 42 Out of the past, my hurdy-gurdy Man - Miriam 20:23:40 1/27/2002
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- (none) - Starling Lynn 18:43:56 1/27/2002
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- Looking Through Mirrors - Alice Kneehigh 12:24:06 1/27/2002
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- For greg - Victoria 09:17:29 1/27/2002
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- Endless Treasures Of The Flesh - Starling Lynn 19:50:13 1/26/2002
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- Clandestine Memories In A Locket-cant remeber if I`ve already posted htis..if so here it is again!:') - Starling Lynn 19:20:22 1/26/2002
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- not titled, needs work, help me out w/ a title please :) - victoria 18:46:45 1/26/2002
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- i had a dream last night - Krista 18:39:53 1/26/2002
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- "Escribir, Escribir, Escribir" I woke this morning to a bird c alling out...* - Miriam 16:06:43 1/26/2002
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- dusted wings - Victoria 15:43:49 1/26/2002
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- the glass circular tube - don windrom 14:44:42 1/26/2002
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- ficticous media figures - don windrom 14:18:39 1/26/2002
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- germ warfare - victoria 14:07:55 1/26/2002
(7)
- begging for love - don windrom 13:58:42 1/26/2002
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- Poetic Justice In The Night - Starling Lynn 13:55:35 1/26/2002
(5)
- the lust demon - don windrom 13:48:36 1/26/2002
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- Untitled 4-revised - Starling Lynn 13:15:00 1/26/2002
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- third world war - don windrom 09:16:54 1/26/2002
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- Late November - Req 09:08:01 1/26/2002
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- the devil chatting with his client - don windrom 08:48:08 1/26/2002
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- kind of a love poem - Floyd Wilde 17:20:54 1/25/2002
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- Adv..Needs Work ,A Page to Murder the Queen (he's just but a boy) - Miriam 17:11:18 1/25/2002
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- Help - Kelly Doyle 21:21:43 1/24/2002
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- Re: Help - Victoria 11:35:01 1/26/2002
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- Re: Help - Lynn 09:05:29 1/25/2002
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- Edge - Hayley 17:55:37 1/24/2002
(3)
- It Dosent Have To Be-revised - Starling Lynn 17:53:04 1/24/2002
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- Primrose hitchhiking - Miriam 15:32:19 1/24/2002
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- Star Child, I fell off the star, I fell off the sun - Miriam 15:23:09 1/24/2002
(4)
- youngsters of today - don windrom 12:33:01 1/24/2002
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- How Will You Then - Starling Lynn 11:55:01 1/24/2002
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- game being told and sold - don windrom 11:54:48 1/24/2002
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- finger licking good - don windrom 11:46:46 1/24/2002
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- Karegaii Hanabi - shinigami 09:48:07 1/24/2002
(3)
- Solitary in need, Advancing life - Softpoet 20:45:11 1/22/2002
(3)
- Acid Maker (not sure if needs work, please critique) - Moe 20:43:17 1/22/2002
(9)
- Deathbed Regret - Simple 20:01:42 1/22/2002
(4)
- Untitled - Steve 17:51:19 1/22/2002
(3)
- EDON - don windrom 17:43:05 1/22/2002
(1)
- patriots and steel - don windrom 17:34:34 1/22/2002
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- the eagle and the ram - don windrom 17:28:42 1/22/2002
(0)
- Improvisation on a late night bus - GP 23:00:53 1/21/2002
(2)
- Slammed to the floor - Victoria 18:23:47 1/21/2002
(3)
- Black Rose In The Mist-needs work - Starling Lynn 17:55:08 1/21/2002
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- The Grave - Moe 16:30:27 1/21/2002
(10)
- QUESTIONS - Moe 14:58:11 1/21/2002
(5)
- A mothers song - jade 11:32:32 1/21/2002
(3)
- Tribute to Martin Luther King, Jr. - M. Y. 10:14:40 1/21/2002
(2)
- Dawn - Victoria 09:33:49 1/21/2002
(10)
- Re: Dawn - Condor 20:41:09 1/21/2002
(1)
- Re: Dawn - Victoria 09:47:16 1/22/2002
(0)
- Re: Dawn - Lynn 16:31:56 1/21/2002
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- Re: Dawn - victoria 17:58:49 1/21/2002
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- Re: Dawn - Moe 14:47:21 1/21/2002
(3)
- Re: Dawn - Victoria 15:15:23 1/21/2002
(2)
- Re: Dawn - Moe 16:07:04 1/21/2002
(1)
- Re: Dawn - victoria 18:00:21 1/21/2002
(0)
- Re: Dawn - Jason Thomas 10:48:04 1/21/2002
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- Re: Dawn - Victoria 13:41:52 1/21/2002
(0)
- benightedness - islington 04:58:14 1/21/2002
(3)
- trepidation - islington 04:53:09 1/21/2002
(2)
- porpoise - Floyd Wilde 22:44:13 1/20/2002
(1)
- happy we'end - PoeticaL 22:37:41 1/20/2002
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- My Crow Speak - Softpoet 17:34:43 1/20/2002
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- Swimmimg against the tide..painting class - Miriam 15:42:45 1/20/2002
(2)
- Metamorphosis - Brad 18:42:39 1/19/2002
(2)
- Saturday night - rozie 16:29:31 1/19/2002
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- Winter`s Vocals - Starling Lynn 14:59:49 1/19/2002
(6)
- Drifting - Jason Thomas 00:58:50 1/19/2002
(4)
- The Sun and the Moon (A Love Story) - Clarissa 21:55:07 1/18/2002
(4)
- I Know - Simple 21:41:27 1/18/2002
(4)
- This has been no day of Shadow or Flash...yet - This has been no day of shadow or flash 20:51:59 1/18/2002
(3)
- that fateful day......of crapola - Infinite Wisdom 19:44:18 1/18/2002
(2)
- On A Lonely Beach-life - Starling Lynn 16:59:30 1/18/2002
(2)
- essence - don windrom 14:47:16 1/18/2002
(4)
- just be - PoeticaL 13:08:37 1/18/2002
(7)
- the bear and the eagle - don windrom 12:54:49 1/18/2002
(3)
- For Everything There Is A Season - hoot_owl_rn 12:39:27 1/18/2002
(7)
- Embracing the Sound - Shilex 21:00:49 1/17/2002
(2)
- Only You - N8ball 20:41:03 1/17/2002
(2)
- I Bought s Book of Collected Poems and i am Angry - Miriam 15:42:01 1/17/2002
(4)
- On the page (not so sure about this one, could definitely use help) - Victoria 14:49:11 1/17/2002
(8)
- A Jumbled MEss - Shilex 12:31:46 1/17/2002
(1)
- The Journey - Moe 23:46:06 1/16/2002
(4)
- To Die, To Sleep - Moe 23:26:43 1/16/2002
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- Childhood - Simple 20:42:15 1/16/2002
(2)
- Feed the Seed - oedipus_man 20:29:54 1/16/2002
(1)
- Just be - PoeticaL 18:42:25 1/16/2002
(5)
- First flower..promises promises - Miriam 20:22:16 1/15/2002
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- Cassaundra - Skyra 21:52:30 1/14/2002
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- A Simple Floor washing - Miriam 21:29:12 1/14/2002
(2)
- In the House - Shereamore Rath 15:28:38 1/14/2002
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- Alone - Jade 13:58:01 1/14/2002
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- Salvation - Mad Prophet 12:30:03 1/14/2002
(3)
- empty frame of love - PoeticaL 08:46:48 1/14/2002
(5)
- What is that? Fire ahead? - Miriam 17:07:09 1/13/2002
(1)
- Old Girl Go Bye Bye - Old Girl's Boy 07:40:37 1/13/2002
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- I hope you had fun - PoeticaL 01:31:15 1/13/2002
(3)
- Lost in time : repost (still needs work so please critique) - Victoria 21:55:58 1/12/2002
(6)
- to music....Grieg - Miriam 21:38:33 1/12/2002
(1)
- Scars - Heartstarter 14:31:35 1/12/2002
(0)
- "Broken Chorus; or Dissonance" - Andrew Staker 00:09:51 1/12/2002
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- Wind and Water - Brad 21:14:37 1/11/2002
(14)
- All I Want - Sara E. Hamlin 16:03:55 1/11/2002
(1)
- Name - Sara E. Hamlin 15:47:10 1/11/2002
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- Re: Name - Brad 20:52:28 1/11/2002
(1)
- Re: Name - Sara E. Hamlin 18:49:41 1/13/2002
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- Re: Name - Victoria 16:27:04 1/11/2002
(0)
- Winter Katsina.."Sometime when the river is ice ask me" William Stafford - Miriam 15:38:38 1/11/2002
(4)
- Lost in Time - Victoria 14:33:34 1/11/2002
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- cornered - Victoria 14:32:09 1/11/2002
(2)
- Perverse Poetic melodies in A minor - Mad Prophet 11:04:56 1/11/2002
(4)
- Stumbling Into Daylight (looking for a little help here) - Genuine 07:57:05 1/11/2002
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- Consideration - boat 03:01:13 1/11/2002
(4)
- Wait For Me - Moe 00:10:50 1/11/2002
(8)
- Ode to Youth (Here's to you baby) - Shereamore Rath 20:05:38 1/10/2002
(7)
- Morning Crow....what's new at your house? - Miriam 15:20:35 1/10/2002
(4)
- Blue Corn Maiden Fetish (a love triangle) - Miriam 14:56:09 1/10/2002
(2)
- Breath of madness - Mad Prophet 13:26:39 1/10/2002
(5)
- The Winds Of Sorrow. - Wayne.Dudoward. 15:24:56 1/09/2002
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- The One and Why-working on title - Beast of Love 10:15:15 1/09/2002
(3)
- Baba...........(another grandmother poem) - Miriam 22:24:14 1/08/2002
(2)
- Death of Life - Moe 21:27:16 1/08/2002
(9)
- Not Enough - Moe 20:54:39 1/08/2002
(4)
- Magic: These Whimsical Thoughts - Genuine 18:57:50 1/08/2002
(3)
- Magic: These Whimsical Thoughts - Genuine 18:57:06 1/08/2002
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- nothing - Hayley 17:05:21 1/08/2002
(3)
- to the stars and back - victoria 16:06:14 1/08/2002
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- earshattering silence - victoria 16:04:24 1/08/2002
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- THE END of me - dead inside (and all over) 15:55:43 1/08/2002
(4)
- Joan of Arc-repost I just got my copywrite in on this and have 2 see if I want anychanges before its finalized and so i`m a bit excited!!lol - Lynn 14:21:06 1/08/2002
(6)
- Listening to the year.....When I hear I see, when I see I hear. Zen Koan - Miriam 12:39:57 1/08/2002
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- Blue Play-Doh (Needs serious Work) - Genuine 11:44:10 1/08/2002
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- temptations - don windrom 11:35:49 1/08/2002
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