Critic Corner #50
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- ...her name is DESCENTION - a-alibaster 10:34:44 8/12/2000
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- Kiss the Lotto Ticket for Good Luck - Mindy 08:50:30 8/12/2000
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- Where are you from? - denzil 06:00:44 8/12/2000
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- Duracell - Denzil 05:58:24 8/12/2000
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- a little bit of memory - Cora 05:55:15 8/12/2000
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- Boffins Bridge - Sick of It! 05:54:34 8/12/2000
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- When it Comes - Cassandra 00:13:28 8/12/2000
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- Run... - michael everest dominguez 23:30:25 8/11/2000
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- p.s. - michael everest 23:37:14 8/11/2000
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- a himilayan snowflake - michael everest dominguez 23:20:26 8/11/2000
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- Sky - Craig 22:48:00 8/11/2000
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- The bitter pause that refleshes Paradise Lust - Miriam 22:10:28 8/11/2000
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- The bitter pause that refleshes Paradise Lust - Miriam 22:00:15 8/11/2000
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- Dark Eyes - Genuine 20:41:18 8/11/2000
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- After Sunshine - Cora 19:46:59 8/11/2000
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- Demode - Cora 19:30:58 8/11/2000
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- May 3, 2000 - Cora 19:16:49 8/11/2000
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- But All I Saw Was Gold (repost) - sweetpoison 18:52:57 8/11/2000
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- I Fell to Him - sweetpoison 18:44:01 8/11/2000
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- Laia's Song - "not poetry, but just a bunch of words" - Cora 18:18:59 8/11/2000
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- Laia's Song - "not poetry, but just a bunch of words" - Cora 17:26:26 8/11/2000
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- Isle of You - Kristy 13:57:37 8/11/2000
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- Death By Cigar - Chris 12:24:06 8/11/2000
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- The Puzzle (repost for chris' weep poem challenge) - Rose 11:03:14 8/11/2000
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- Watch the Cat!* - Miriam 10:31:58 8/11/2000
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- Frozen -(inside insanity) - a-alibaster 09:14:31 8/11/2000
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- Lost in the note (I tweaked it for you Kelly, what do you think?) - Tennison 08:41:07 8/11/2000
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- Heart's song - Dan 08:28:25 8/11/2000
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- attempt at cinquain, feedback appreciated - thequiet1 04:30:15 8/11/2000
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- Emotion Violin - Kristy 04:13:15 8/11/2000
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- Working with coloured pastes inventing a small planet - Miriam 23:02:41 8/10/2000
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- Endgame (repost) - doreen peri 22:24:01 8/10/2000
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- Pill Box Thought - david f. 22:20:59 8/10/2000
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- One too many Adjacent Acquaintances - david f. 22:11:10 8/10/2000
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- Inside Your Smile (for you James!) - Kristy 20:27:18 8/10/2000
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- Pocket Full of Smiles (inspired again by Kristy) - James Thompson 20:15:46 8/10/2000
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- For Wendy (my attempt at a country song that she keeps wanting me to write) - James Thompson 20:04:04 8/10/2000
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- Some Say There is a Heaven - doreen peri 19:29:50 8/10/2000
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- Newsflash - City Lights Bookstore - Michael Feliciano 19:07:43 8/10/2000
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- Lost in the Note - Tennison 16:42:13 8/10/2000
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- End - Kristy 13:31:14 8/10/2000
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- Re: End - Tennison 16:21:47 8/10/2000
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- Re: End - Martin 14:28:33 8/10/2000
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- Re: End - Kelly 14:07:28 8/10/2000
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- Not Sure.... - Second Time 09:17:06 8/10/2000
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- Travel through a Wire - Kristy 08:36:13 8/10/2000
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- Not Sure.. - First Time 08:12:52 8/10/2000
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- Offertory Song for the New Millenium - dennis greene 07:31:29 8/10/2000
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- Daydreaming of daises - Dan 07:07:37 8/10/2000
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- Conflict - PoetaKing 06:31:34 8/10/2000
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- whitewash - Wendi 00:38:11 8/10/2000
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- Visit to a small town on the small planet - Miriam 23:12:39 8/09/2000
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- Blind - Kristy 22:08:10 8/09/2000
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- his hand...... - Kristy 21:58:16 8/09/2000
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- Despair Transcended - Craig 20:48:05 8/09/2000
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- My Predictions For Miss Kelly - Chris 20:40:14 8/09/2000
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- --you can always quote me-- - doreen peri 20:10:25 8/09/2000
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- Lenore (a touch of Poe inspiration again) - James Thompson 19:54:39 8/09/2000
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- The Day of Love - James Thompson 19:37:01 8/09/2000
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- He Calls Me - doreen peri 19:27:12 8/09/2000
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- An Eclipse( work still in progress!!! let me know what you think) - michael everest d. 18:18:37 8/09/2000
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- SNOWFLAKE - Romantic Man 18:05:34 8/09/2000
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- Honeybees - Wendi 16:38:01 8/09/2000
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- Babie Bug - Kristy 16:17:27 8/09/2000
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- For a Saint not Sinner but the line between is Blurred - Fiona 14:59:59 8/09/2000
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- I Would Crumble - Carpe Noctum 14:47:44 8/09/2000
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- Can we...? - Martin 14:45:36 8/09/2000
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- Flower for a friend - Dan 13:15:40 8/09/2000
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- Sententia - Carpe Noctum 12:40:33 8/09/2000
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- He Said - Kristy 11:08:39 8/09/2000
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- Embryonic Mornings - Wendy 10:40:38 8/09/2000
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- Saints Sleeping in the Beds They've Made - thequiet1 10:21:03 8/09/2000
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- Sins of Seven, revised - thequiet1 10:02:06 8/09/2000
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- untitled - david f. 09:36:29 8/09/2000
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- Do You? - Chris 08:42:16 8/09/2000
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- When Love isn't enough - Dan 08:41:22 8/09/2000
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- Lullaby - Shiffonet' 00:08:45 8/09/2000
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- Lullaby - Shiffonet' 00:07:53 8/09/2000
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- COMA - Michael Feliciano 00:01:07 8/09/2000
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- Re: COMA - doreen peri 22:14:07 8/10/2000
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- Re: COMA - Kelly 06:48:43 8/09/2000
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- Re: COMA - Wendy 05:07:37 8/09/2000
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- Re: COMA - Michael Feliciano 07:47:50 8/09/2000
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- Re: COMA - Chris 04:22:32 8/09/2000
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- How to die beautifully - . 22:54:48 8/08/2000
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- I'm Yours (Thanks Kristy!) - Chris 22:26:39 8/08/2000
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- God Smiled - Romantic Man 22:24:08 8/08/2000
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- Can't think of a good title...please help - Chris 21:47:34 8/08/2000
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- Desire - Craig 21:22:24 8/08/2000
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- A Short Poem for Rose - James Thompson 20:55:16 8/08/2000
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- What brute flame of senseless words laid on the alter - Miriam 20:38:23 8/08/2000
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- Chris' Challenge - James Thompson 19:53:48 8/08/2000
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- Topple the King - Kristy 16:51:31 8/08/2000
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- All she needs - amandalani 15:41:12 8/08/2000
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- One Line Too Many - katannah jo jennings 14:07:57 8/08/2000
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- Bio-chemical dilemmas - Martin 14:03:16 8/08/2000
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- So Few Words - Carpe Noctum 13:56:52 8/08/2000
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- Don't Be - Carpe Noctum 13:53:48 8/08/2000
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- Stolen Memory, Given - Carpe Noctum 13:52:23 8/08/2000
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- The end of the world - Dan 13:20:31 8/08/2000
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- Small Memory Box - Miriam 11:16:15 8/08/2000
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- False Idols - thequiet1 10:37:32 8/08/2000
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- Eric (Chris' challenge) - Kristy 09:58:58 8/08/2000
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- Quiet Whispers( repost for Chris' Challenge) - Dan 08:36:01 8/08/2000
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- Note to a cyber-friend - Dan 08:34:38 8/08/2000
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- Published Interview read now or on a repost of a repost later - Wendy 07:27:50 8/08/2000
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- Destroyed Conception Of Mirth - Chris 00:00:07 8/08/2000
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- to my California Poppy - david f 23:40:23 8/07/2000
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- Your Heart - Craig 23:31:36 8/07/2000
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- I LOVE PRIYA!!!!! - Raquel 23:31:19 8/07/2000
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- My Peach - Kristy 23:29:33 8/07/2000
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- Fucking - Cassandra 23:19:14 8/07/2000
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- Future - Kristy 22:28:07 8/07/2000
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- Thinking about love poems wondering what to say about the grandfather - Miriam 21:56:01 8/07/2000
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- I Never Knew - James Thompson 21:48:45 8/07/2000
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- This Time - James Thompson 21:32:07 8/07/2000
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- The way it is - Jada the fish 21:23:28 8/07/2000
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- My Past Bands That All Sucked - Chris 21:21:11 8/07/2000
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- Elizabeth's poem - michael everest d. 21:14:21 8/07/2000
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- Sins of Seven - thequiet1 21:06:39 8/07/2000
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- Hey Wendy...here's the rewrite based on your comments...thanks and hope this is better - the 7th moon 20:46:32 8/07/2000
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- Count the Ways - Craig 19:59:01 8/07/2000
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- portent - Carole 18:30:13 8/07/2000
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- Again - Ann Bingham 18:20:57 8/07/2000
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- CatDog (Dan’s challenge) - Kristy 15:59:45 8/07/2000
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- express fingers - Lee 15:24:04 8/07/2000
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- 14 354 - Lee 14:43:50 8/07/2000
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- Counter Productive =P - Kristy 13:34:09 8/07/2000
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- I'd Like Company - Tho jackson 10:23:46 8/07/2000
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- Dissapear - Kristy 09:48:04 8/07/2000
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- Stage Left - Kristy 09:39:47 8/07/2000
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- fishers - three 06:16:25 8/07/2000
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- DOGMA - Michael Feliciano 01:01:02 8/07/2000
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- Re: DOGMA - Wendy 11:28:59 8/07/2000
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- Re: DOGMA - Michael Feliciano 22:59:51 8/08/2000
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- Re: DOGMA - Michael Feliciano 22:54:56 8/08/2000
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- Re: DOGMA - Kristy 09:35:23 8/07/2000
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- Re: DOGMA - Michael Feliciano 22:58:15 8/08/2000
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- Chatting with Marvin - MICHAEL FELICIANO 00:39:18 8/07/2000
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- When Men Become Gods - Chris 00:30:50 8/07/2000
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- Last Wishes - MICHAEL FELICIANO 23:58:02 8/06/2000
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- Sick-boy poem - ROFLMAO 21:44:12 8/06/2000
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- The Rebel - James Thompson 18:56:47 8/06/2000
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- Rose's Petal (re-post) (this is for you David F.) - Fae 15:01:37 8/06/2000
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- Mail Box - PoetaKing 14:50:33 8/06/2000
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- Finger Painting - Tom 09:19:42 8/06/2000
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- Life Anew - Chuck Pool 07:45:32 8/06/2000
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- His Happiness - Kristy 03:10:48 8/06/2000
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- Indifference - Lawson MacDonald 03:06:30 8/06/2000
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- The heat of love the promise of warmth the cold of loss - Miriam 23:49:15 8/05/2000
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- Lost - Pittyman 23:02:11 8/05/2000
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- Re: Lost - JEss 20:29:56 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Pittyman 22:29:06 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Rose 15:13:08 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Pittyman 22:26:37 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Martin 14:46:52 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Pittyman 22:23:07 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Kelly 12:53:57 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Pittyman 22:12:05 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Cindy** 01:45:04 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Pittyman 22:05:11 8/06/2000
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- Re: Lost - Kristy 23:29:31 8/05/2000
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- Re: Lost - Pittyman 22:03:51 8/06/2000
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- Discreet Reservation - Craig 22:41:29 8/05/2000
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- You Know What...I'M ALIVE - rastas 22:24:35 8/05/2000
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- Chicago nights Are For the Love of Sex And Peonies (wendys challengeFinally) - Rose 22:04:21 8/05/2000
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- Perhaps...... - Souxie 20:55:02 8/05/2000
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- Lou Reed's Finger Nail Crut - David F. 19:12:56 8/05/2000
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- Sauvie Island in August, Birds Bees and the Tall woman we love - Miriam 16:56:32 8/05/2000
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- Rainbow in a can - Kristy 16:18:04 8/05/2000
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- Speed (carlenes challenge....sound) - Kristy 13:00:40 8/05/2000
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- odina (the mountian) - carlene 12:39:57 8/05/2000
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- Euphoria Splash - Martin 12:27:29 8/05/2000
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- anger - L.D.L. 12:15:47 8/05/2000
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- The Dreams of a Dreaming Child - Fae 07:50:35 8/05/2000
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- help w/ title please - David F. 01:10:35 8/05/2000
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- Renal Calculi Song #? - David F. 01:07:12 8/05/2000
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- ashtray solitudes - David F. 01:02:14 8/05/2000
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- Kristys Challange--finally - Deborah Ann 00:08:45 8/05/2000
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- It grew too cold to burn - . 23:41:22 8/04/2000
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- Wendys Challange--What Love Is - Deborah Ann 22:41:14 8/04/2000
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- It's hard to be in two places at once.... - doreen peri 21:48:36 8/04/2000
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- Ghost of a Once Impassioned Prisoner - The Forbidden One 21:21:29 8/04/2000
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- Exponential Sums - doreen peri 20:00:37 8/04/2000
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- There Are No Masterpeices... - Carpe N-cognito 16:32:45 8/04/2000
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- Somber Core - Carpe N-cognito 16:32:07 8/04/2000
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- Crayola Dreams - Carpe N-cognito 16:31:33 8/04/2000
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- Sinister Dominance - Carpe N-cognito 16:30:42 8/04/2000
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- Me, From Myself... - Carpe N-cognito 16:30:06 8/04/2000
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- In The End, No Apologies - Carpe N-cognito 16:29:23 8/04/2000
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- my take on Wendy's challenge: what are we? - carlene 15:59:15 8/04/2000
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- The Joy of Moaning - Martin 15:45:38 8/04/2000
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- (HE THRUSTS HIS FISTS AGAINST THE POST AND STILL INSISTS HE SEES THE GHOST) a group of words since for spewed from my mouth and pen but inadequate for their own post - rastas 14:52:53 8/04/2000
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- Ok...the rhyme is forced...(Kristy's challenge) - Jennifer 14:51:42 8/04/2000
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- as yet untitled, happy to recieve ODD title suggestions - rastas 14:39:54 8/04/2000
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- lullaby (repost) - Dan 14:36:10 8/04/2000
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- Within His Mighty Towers (up for contest tomorrow!!!!!!!) - sweetpoison 14:34:03 8/04/2000
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- An attempt at Wendy's challenge - Jennifer 14:00:57 8/04/2000
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- Happy Type Semi Generic Love Poem- closer to Wendy's challange then my last post - Dan 13:44:33 8/04/2000
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- A heart's grandest canyon with not one companion - Craig 13:35:43 8/04/2000
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- When the pretending stopped (repost for Wendy's challange) - Dan 13:35:34 8/04/2000
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- Asking for the raise-Kristy's challange - Dan 13:31:20 8/04/2000
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- Hand Out (my own challenge...do unto others...) - Kristy 13:11:11 8/04/2000
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- Catastrophe Theory (Wendy's Challenge) - Cassandra 13:10:44 8/04/2000
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- Salary Hearts and the Art of the Choke(kristy's challenge) - Wendy 12:56:57 8/04/2000
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- Letter-poem to My Sister (reworked) - Bethany (what do you think of the FP repitition?) 12:41:31 8/04/2000
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- Water Pipe Disaster Stops City Dead in Tracks - Fiona 12:18:01 8/04/2000
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- looking for criticisms on my poem(into the cyreplex)posted 8/03 please read!!! - michael everest d. 12:15:28 8/04/2000
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- A repost for the love poem challenge - Wendy 12:14:37 8/04/2000
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- This Time Last Year (Wendy's Challenge) - Fiona 12:01:43 8/04/2000
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- Gloxinia for breakfast Gladiola for tea "and so the fairies sipped from flowers" anon - Miriam 11:53:17 8/04/2000
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- Vastness (Wendy's challenge) - Kristy 11:42:57 8/04/2000
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- Rhapsody in a Blue Jazz Dawn (repost for Wendy's challenge) - doreen peri 10:59:46 8/04/2000
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- Comfort Bleak #2 (same thought simplistic) - Kristy 09:35:38 8/04/2000
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- Comfort Bleak - Kristy 09:31:28 8/04/2000
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- Swan Song - Dan 09:19:25 8/04/2000
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- Unrighteous Prayer - PoetaKing 09:18:08 8/04/2000
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- So she said...(previously Symphony) - Tennison 09:16:21 8/04/2000
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- sanctifiedgirl - don windrom 08:55:26 8/04/2000
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- Different - Kristy 05:35:37 8/04/2000
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- Human Sexuality - Kristy 05:33:40 8/04/2000
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- crazy memory - carlene 05:03:47 8/04/2000
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- delight - carlene 04:33:34 8/04/2000
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- 1st (altered) - carlene 04:11:11 8/04/2000
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- DIESEL - MICHAEL FELICIANO 02:22:52 8/04/2000
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- DEVINE MECHANISM - MICHAEL FELICIANO 02:02:17 8/04/2000
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- Ode to Carolyn - MICHAEL FELICIANO 01:27:09 8/04/2000
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- STEP ONE IS A DOOZY - MICHAEL FELICIANO 01:04:45 8/04/2000
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- JUNK ON THE BUNK - Michael Feliciano 00:45:42 8/04/2000
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- Meaningless - . 00:06:31 8/04/2000
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- For carl - Carmen 22:43:17 8/03/2000
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- Considering the trifolium a zen moment - Miriam 22:39:09 8/03/2000
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- Into the cyreplex ( three parts) - michael everest d. 21:57:04 8/03/2000
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- Until I Enter Your Heart - Craig 19:52:14 8/03/2000
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- Untitled (7-6-7, lying in the grass) - Astroglyphics 19:07:56 8/03/2000
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- Do You ever think of me? - Craig 18:55:52 8/03/2000
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- Baggy Clothes (reworked) - Wendy 17:27:16 8/03/2000
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- Haiku [unofficially(sp?) titled 'soul release'] - Astroglyphics 16:50:30 8/03/2000
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- Fractus - Cassandra 16:33:51 8/03/2000
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- welcome - Brenda Star 16:08:15 8/03/2000
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- Shadow Wing - Carpe N-cognito 15:22:06 8/03/2000
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- The first visit - Dan 15:01:38 8/03/2000
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- Symphony - Tennison 14:54:47 8/03/2000
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- Holy Ground - Carpe N-cognito 14:51:21 8/03/2000
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- Revalations - Carpe N-cognito 14:50:13 8/03/2000
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- Is - Kristy 13:20:53 8/03/2000
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- Re: Is - Deb. 17:07:24 8/03/2000
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- Re: Is - Craig 13:33:37 8/03/2000
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- What If - Mindy 13:13:14 8/03/2000
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- For my only belove - Aimee 12:59:48 8/03/2000
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- Alone i sing for you - Jaguar 12:50:16 8/03/2000
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- reproached....I am writing for Arthur - Pammie 12:42:27 8/03/2000
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- The viper - Dan 12:08:14 8/03/2000
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- Dear Nobody (his identity revealed) - Kristy 11:39:01 8/03/2000
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- Daily Dregs: A Synopsis - doreen peri 11:38:57 8/03/2000
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- VaNiSh - Gardian 11:35:01 8/03/2000
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- Behind falling - Kristy 09:52:12 8/03/2000
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- Demonic Cornflakes - PaganSaint 09:34:05 8/03/2000
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- Dark ranting - PaganSaint 09:29:26 8/03/2000
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- Radiant me you'll never be. - Kristy 09:15:38 8/03/2000
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- What is a friend? - Dan 08:45:34 8/03/2000
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- Tell me more, I dont want to be a victim - Becky 08:34:52 8/03/2000
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- Hey look! I can use a rhyming dictionary too! - nobody 08:24:32 8/03/2000
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- Wretched - Danny 08:17:01 8/03/2000
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- 'Bens Nasty Little Infestation' - Kristy 07:48:23 8/03/2000
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- "Pinkie"(D) State Representative, LA. - don windrom 06:59:31 8/03/2000
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- HAJ - denzil 06:53:39 8/03/2000
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- colors (just for fun!)) - carrie viohl 06:41:20 8/03/2000
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- I Am the BOMB BABIE!!!!!!!!! - Kristy 06:28:24 8/03/2000
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- Do you remember? - Kristy 04:19:38 8/03/2000
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- R.I.P. - Kristy 04:18:23 8/03/2000
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- .......... - RC 04:17:05 8/03/2000
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- Happiness - Robert Lee 22:48:43 8/02/2000
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- Wonderous Dream - Lawson MacDonald (hey guys check my bud...Kristy!!!) 19:38:15 8/02/2000
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- Making Me - Craig 19:29:04 8/02/2000
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- Prescription for Loneliness - Kristy 19:25:21 8/02/2000
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- In Your Presence - the 7th moon 19:15:26 8/02/2000
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- Maxine - Danielle 19:06:00 8/02/2000
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- A Dose of Blues (you guessed it, inspired by Kristy) - James Thompson 18:24:58 8/02/2000
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- Completion with out competition - The American 18:05:33 8/02/2000
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- Naming A Painting "Ebby's Catnip Dreams" - Miriam 17:37:25 8/02/2000
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- "If ever I may. . ." - Craig 17:24:16 8/02/2000
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- Ready made tears - Lithin 17:08:33 8/02/2000
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- Death - Martha Steward 16:54:26 8/02/2000
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- Phonecard - Therasa 16:46:56 8/02/2000
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- Acceptance can kiss... - Kristy 16:20:37 8/02/2000
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- YTY - PoetaKing 15:41:03 8/02/2000
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- Re: YTY - Kelly 15:44:01 8/02/2000
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- Re: YTY - PoetaKing 09:27:57 8/03/2000
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- Re: YTY - Kelly 15:44:44 8/02/2000
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- A sprout is rebirthed - Shaman lover 15:14:45 8/02/2000
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- Suburbia - Martin 15:07:26 8/02/2000
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- Expedited processing needed - SM 15:05:17 8/02/2000
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- Swampy waters saved my soul - Liver Tyler 14:58:46 8/02/2000
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- Clock srikes midnight - Dan 14:43:56 8/02/2000
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- Released finally - Harvey 14:22:50 8/02/2000
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- Another Poem For Kristy(just because she is so dang inspiring) - Chris 13:57:51 8/02/2000
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- Beached on the beach - The American 13:11:51 8/02/2000
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- Lust for Breakfast - 12:43:12 8/02/2000
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- LoVe - Gardian 12:25:38 8/02/2000
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- When the pretending stopped - Dan 10:44:29 8/02/2000
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- (It is a repost) - Guess...I bet you won't! 10:28:49 8/02/2000
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- Acknowledge my silence - Aimee 10:21:55 8/02/2000
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- Why does the whole world think they know me? - Kristy 10:15:31 8/02/2000
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- For My fresh petals - Jaguar 10:00:13 8/02/2000
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- Truth and Other Rumors - Infinity 09:10:44 8/02/2000
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- Take your hands off me you perverse latin teaching freak! - denzil 08:39:35 8/02/2000
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- Free Key-Rings For All. - denzil 08:35:59 8/02/2000
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- Phew. - denzil 08:27:54 8/02/2000
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- I right - Kristy 07:51:35 8/02/2000
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- Revalations - Carpe Noctum 07:40:12 8/02/2000
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- Visualise - denzil 06:42:42 8/02/2000
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- Unfinished fantasy - . 02:40:30 8/02/2000
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- To my sweet chiming angel - Jaguar 23:31:24 8/01/2000
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- How did you find me here dark prophet - Aimee 23:23:56 8/01/2000
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- Night, after a three-digit day in Fresno - Bethany 23:22:28 8/01/2000
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- Anyone - Kristy 23:14:33 8/01/2000
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- For your tender heart - Jaguar 22:47:02 8/01/2000
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- What secret book have you held in your heart from earliest days - Miriam 22:34:46 8/01/2000
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- I am your MUSE - Tony Durtis 22:07:40 8/01/2000
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- Lying Deep Within - Scott Roth 22:00:59 8/01/2000
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- Pure - Kristy 21:53:23 8/01/2000
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- Music the pipe, birds, cats, and of course my moon love - Theresa 21:45:54 8/01/2000
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- everything wasn't enough - Jess 21:44:26 8/01/2000
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- I Needed you like a Gun needs a bullet:) - Jess 21:35:57 8/01/2000
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- dam i just realized..its not about you anymore - for my new throbbing heart 20:51:37 8/01/2000
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- Love Lost? (a long time ago) - James Thompson 20:50:19 8/01/2000
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- Disinherited my darkness that is - copper field and magic 20:38:41 8/01/2000
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- ...!? - Carpe Noctum 07:34:15 8/02/2000
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- Reflecting.....who will sing at my funeral - ROBERT gary 20:31:41 8/01/2000
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- So Fond of You - Craig 20:28:42 8/01/2000
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- Muses Priesthood - stupid me, and the COWBODY 20:25:46 8/01/2000
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- A New Recipe - James Thompson 20:18:04 8/01/2000
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- Peeling Apples - Tom 19:51:08 8/01/2000
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- 3 AM Color Bars - Patrick 19:46:20 8/01/2000
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- As Close As We Want To Be - Kelly 18:02:02 8/01/2000
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- Nothing (a poem about nothing... repost from long ago ;) - doreen peri 17:47:08 8/01/2000
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- (one re-post before I go to bed) "why the locust sings" - carrie viohl 16:25:46 8/01/2000
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- last one for the reading group - Delia 15:56:34 8/01/2000
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- ALONE! ! ! ! ! - Tori 15:43:26 8/01/2000
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- death is it evil? - muttering.....with bate 15:37:38 8/01/2000
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- odina (the mountian) - carrie viohl 15:28:29 8/01/2000
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- Beaks a little bent - Kristy 15:27:59 8/01/2000
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- #35 those.....still holding REGRET... - DU MAL RICHARD 15:26:33 8/01/2000
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- Insatiable (edit) - Martin 15:24:33 8/01/2000
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- Lust - PaganSaint 14:27:08 8/01/2000
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- Re: Lust - Martin 10:38:19 8/02/2000
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- Re: Lust - Wendy 17:21:25 8/01/2000
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- Re: Lust - Kelly 16:16:40 8/01/2000
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- Re: Lust - PaganSaint 16:25:38 8/01/2000
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- Re: Lust - doreen peri 15:16:32 8/01/2000
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- Princess of my pain - Dan 14:11:28 8/01/2000
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- The Joker Surmises - Wendy 14:09:01 8/01/2000
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- ghetto pre-k - carrie viohl 13:39:42 8/01/2000
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- love poem...a play on how silly love makes us! - carrie viohl 13:17:23 8/01/2000
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- your voice (it's short and sweet and unfinished...the poem not the voice!) - carrie viohl 13:13:59 8/01/2000
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- TO THE LILY FOR DINNER FORGET THE VEGGIES LETS EAT MEAT - TWO SOCKS ARE TOGETHER NOW 12:33:12 8/01/2000
(1)
- Do Dreams Come True? - Veronica 10:00:28 8/01/2000
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- Vegetables from the LOIRE valley - A France production 09:55:17 8/01/2000
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- Ready to go - Tori 08:48:43 8/01/2000
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- For Dark Revalations (I'm sorry) - Carpe Noctum 08:25:36 8/01/2000
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- Perebene - Dark Revelations 13:58:58 8/01/2000
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- The dream and the nightmare - Dan 08:04:26 8/01/2000
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- The Census Bureau's Dilemma - doreen peri 05:18:33 8/01/2000
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- Taffeta - Heather Nowlan 03:19:52 8/01/2000
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- August Moon oh August Moon Let's sail paper boats and taste lemons - Miriam 23:46:34 7/31/2000
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- Return of Dreams - Amanda Lani 22:49:31 7/31/2000
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- Apocalyptic Deer Crossing - Chris 22:41:39 7/31/2000
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- books creeping banned books - Lithin 22:05:26 7/31/2000
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- Al Fumayle On People In The Female Category - Marq 21:54:18 7/31/2000
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- Counting Sheep and Sleeping Pills(slight rewrite) - Rose 21:40:55 7/31/2000
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- Stone Cold Union - Genuine 20:48:53 7/31/2000
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- Just me, myself, and I (just a really bad feeling) - Tori 20:44:30 7/31/2000
(8)
- ~ The Laundry Quand'ry ~ - doreen peri 20:12:05 7/31/2000
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- O'K. so Now What? - Mindy 20:02:37 7/31/2000
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- Ailing - James Thompson 19:53:48 7/31/2000
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- Upright I stand on my grave - flabby SETH 19:48:12 7/31/2000
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- Bread (still weird) - James Thompson (Jimbo) 19:21:55 7/31/2000
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- Air In, Air Out - 45870 19:18:15 7/31/2000
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- Crickets (gettin' weird) - James Thompson 19:13:22 7/31/2000
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- $ - poet 18:40:33 7/31/2000
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- Re: $ - Kelly 07:29:38 8/01/2000
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- dear darling - poet 18:37:06 7/31/2000
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- Monty asked me to repost this... - Wendy 17:53:34 7/31/2000
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- ~ Body Parts ~ - doreen peri 17:36:01 7/31/2000
(4)
- paranoid - lucia 17:08:06 7/31/2000
(3)
- Moments Lost - C.N. 16:30:28 7/31/2000
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- One last time - Dan 15:42:53 7/31/2000
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- Part of your wardrobe (repost of just an an accessory) - Dan 15:41:57 7/31/2000
(1)
- Looking for a title. - Carpe Noctum 14:54:01 7/31/2000
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- Merest whisper.... - Kristy 13:53:54 7/31/2000
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- You Or Someone Very Much Like You - ADChris 13:13:26 7/31/2000
(2)
- "Deviation from style but same thoughts all the while?" - crAig 11:37:15 7/31/2000
(5)
- Do We? - PoetaKing 09:57:55 7/31/2000
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- The Way Of Things - ADC 09:46:59 7/31/2000
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