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- When speaking in metaphor - Priscilla 17:44:06 10/20/99
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- Not being able to sleep - Priscilla 17:31:13 10/20/99
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- But That Is Not The Beginning - Soleil 17:03:11 10/20/99
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- THE TRIBAL EPIC, Pt. IIII: The Customs of the New - rastas 16:08:30 10/20/99
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- 147 - Kirsys 15:35:54 10/20/99
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- Re: 147 - Bob 01:10:57 10/21/99
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- Re: 147 - Wendy 17:20:29 10/20/99
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- Re: 147 - kirsys 17:38:18 10/20/99
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- SLAG HEAP - Bob 12:02:19 10/20/99
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- ITHOUGHT I LIKED THESE SHOES (in response to Rasta's PROPASITION posted on Oct.7)(to be read out loud.) - Robert Steffen 10:58:54 10/20/99
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- The Viscosity of Tears - Wendy 10:50:43 10/20/99
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- The Lawn Ornament - Josh K 09:52:45 10/20/99
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- THE TRIBAL EPIC, Pt. III: The Evils of the Empire - rastas 23:36:06 10/19/99
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- Thoughts On Vega$ (not a poem, just a lil' something i whipped up) - rastas 23:19:27 10/19/99
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- Victums - User(Bonyo) 21:14:02 10/19/99
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- Last Sun Mourning - Kirsys 20:34:04 10/19/99
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- CHANNELS - Ivy Iviana 19:52:19 10/19/99
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- Usual (a short story... don't worry it's short) - xallanthia 17:53:58 10/19/99
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- The Color of Dreams - jahjah 17:34:47 10/19/99
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- Andi Reed - TaintedAngel 12:45:33 10/19/99
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- Fear - Angela S. 12:09:20 10/19/99
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- Better! - brian long 13:31:26 10/19/99
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- Re: Fear - endo 12:50:22 10/19/99
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- Re: Fear - rastas 23:53:01 10/19/99
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- To Endo - Angela S. 13:15:34 10/19/99
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- memory - brian zahn 10:58:38 10/19/99
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- The Last - TaintedAngel 10:22:28 10/19/99
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- California Living - estlins friend 09:31:56 10/19/99
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- Don't really have one-suggestions needed, though - SHereamore Rath 09:18:54 10/19/99
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- Temporary Insanity - Angela S. 06:13:26 10/19/99
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- Poetic Masterbation - Angela S. 06:08:55 10/19/99
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- Marginal Blessings - El Bonyo 00:15:56 10/19/99
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- Bitter wind, bittergrass, bitterwater Bitter winter - Ziniyopa 23:46:56 10/18/99
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- him... - Karma Sutra 17:02:32 10/18/99
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- Insignificant Existance - Condor 16:20:12 10/18/99
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- YOU - Angela S. 14:54:14 10/18/99
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- WATER (when no one is watching) - Kirsys 14:38:33 10/18/99
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- MASTER PLAN - clay miller 14:21:58 10/18/99
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- My Friends - Kirsys 14:16:04 10/18/99
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- ???suggestions??? - Auroura 13:50:19 10/18/99
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- Real Illusions (Maybe you'll like this one this time... maybe?) - Adam 13:45:18 10/18/99
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- WHY? - TaintedAngel 13:00:48 10/18/99
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- Silent Reply - Josh K 12:28:19 10/18/99
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- Who Are You Available For - Angela S. 10:07:56 10/18/99
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- Minor Poet - Nick D 08:08:30 10/18/99
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- Spoon Fed - Dream Maker 04:44:49 10/18/99
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- The Simple Ramblings of a Misunderstood Man - Dream Maker 04:36:21 10/18/99
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- Let's go loopy loo she sang - Butterfly Girl 23:10:45 10/17/99
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- Girl in our Kitchen - El Bonly 23:03:48 10/17/99
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- Those of Us - Japk 19:24:24 10/17/99
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- finding my way out - japk 19:13:05 10/17/99
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- Paint me a wall, build me a fountain, grow me a firefly - Miriam 19:10:24 10/17/99
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- Yesterday's Orphans (draft) - Soleil 15:49:28 10/17/99
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- Our only master (a revised "the only truths") - Lydia 09:03:46 10/17/99
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- distraction - Auroura 07:53:06 10/17/99
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- In Appreciation - Darien Vincent 07:34:20 10/17/99
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- threw your stuff - ross mccauley 23:12:51 10/16/99
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- elk scorcer - ross mccauley 23:04:10 10/16/99
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- Twilight - Rose Losey 21:34:47 10/16/99
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- THE ISLANDERS - clay miller 13:23:25 10/16/99
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- THE SIMPLE MAN - clay miller 13:18:09 10/16/99
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- Athenian Woman - Kirsys 13:10:21 10/16/99
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- SMOTHER - Kirsys 13:04:27 10/16/99
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- SUPPOSE - Kirsys 12:59:13 10/16/99
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- Scraping Off The Sides For Fine Dining - Kirsys 12:53:31 10/16/99
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- Average among Extradinary - Rose Losey 10:20:38 10/16/99
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- hurricane force - asset 09:05:56 10/16/99
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- Grace - rich 08:57:49 10/16/99
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- We - Anders Claassens 07:22:21 10/16/99
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- Byzantium rhyme - bernard 06:15:21 10/16/99
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- Night Creature...The Finale - Dream Maker 05:53:57 10/16/99
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- Glass Women - anatevka 00:47:53 10/16/99
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- A Statement To All Contributors - Condor 23:46:02 10/15/99
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- Wordly (Worldly) Renditions - Condor 23:13:19 10/15/99
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- talk to me in chains - ben 22:17:24 10/15/99
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- a small complication - --rm-- 22:11:19 10/15/99
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- THE TRIBAL EPIC, Pt. II: The End of The Beginning - rastas 20:51:31 10/15/99
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- Funny Funny Ha Ha, Funny Funny Queer - rastas 20:40:02 10/15/99
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- kitn75@hotmail.com - heather 18:34:26 10/15/99
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- Life's Waves (different...) - Adam 16:42:35 10/15/99
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- The Dilemma (Sorry guys... it rhymes) - Adam 16:31:28 10/15/99
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- "Drama" - Donald Windrom 14:05:50 10/15/99
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- "Trauma" - Donald Windrom 14:01:17 10/15/99
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- If Charles Manson was a Nigga" - Donald Windrom 13:54:08 10/15/99
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- "Daddy's Little Girl" - Donald Windrom 13:46:29 10/15/99
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- "Numbers" - Donald Windrom 13:40:42 10/15/99
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- "hairy inuendos" - Donald Windrom 13:35:33 10/15/99
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- "COINTELPRO" - Donald Windrom 13:30:16 10/15/99
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- "FEZ" - Donald Windrom 13:18:45 10/15/99
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- "Legalize It........and I'll advertise it - Donald Windrom 13:07:49 10/15/99
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- The Bus Stop - Angela S. 13:07:38 10/15/99
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- "PROLIFERATION" - Donald Windrom 12:58:33 10/15/99
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- Night Creature (part three) - Dream Maker 12:53:56 10/15/99
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- To Brian Long - Angela S. 11:12:43 10/15/99
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- Night Creature (part 2) - Dream Maker 10:26:31 10/15/99
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- UNTITLED - poetic_paradise 10:03:47 10/15/99
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- How To Write a Junkie Poem 101 - Fiona 09:08:41 10/15/99
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- You WILL Conform - Dream Maker 07:35:19 10/15/99
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- Haiku (trying it again) - Angela S. 07:22:58 10/15/99
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- Night Creature - Dream Maker 06:53:42 10/15/99
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- Ebonics - Angela S. 06:12:19 10/15/99
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- Promises, Promises - Angela S. 06:05:44 10/15/99
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- Haiku (wannabe) - Angela S. 06:02:42 10/15/99
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- Closet Space - Dream Maker 04:54:51 10/15/99
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- Death of a Dead Man - Dream Maker 04:37:24 10/15/99
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- Wilted Rose - Dream Maker 04:18:32 10/15/99
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- Crisp red leaves and the taste of trees - Miriam 22:21:34 10/14/99
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- Crisp red leaves and the taste of trees - Miriam 22:18:41 10/14/99
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- strong (I haven't written in a long time so your thoughts would be appreciated) - Spam 19:52:30 10/14/99
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- Random Thought - Soleil 16:52:37 10/14/99
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- Moment (haiku) - xallanthia 16:13:03 10/14/99
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- Ode to My Green Pen (a silly work) - xallanthia 15:48:19 10/14/99
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- Ode to My Green Pen (a silly work) - xallanthia 15:48:13 10/14/99
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- untitled... and I like it that way - Xallanthia 15:42:29 10/14/99
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- Saxophone Blues - Angela S. 14:20:44 10/14/99
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- But She's All There - Wendy 13:32:37 10/14/99
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- Reverse Psychology - Angela S. 13:11:16 10/14/99
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- The Bay Window Morning (had to get a rhyme in here).... - Josh K 12:51:33 10/14/99
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- THE MARCH OF DEATH - estlins friend 11:04:15 10/14/99
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- A Pit in the Groove of my A.M. Ritual - Fiona 10:23:02 10/14/99
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- FADING LIGHT - Nick D 07:55:37 10/14/99
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- InThe Midst of a Sinister Garden - Angela Sterling 06:38:48 10/14/99
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- vampire - robin ann 19:19:09 10/13/99
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- ok so i'm posting two rhyming poems... - jilly 17:41:00 10/13/99
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- oooh... i wanna post a rhyming poem too! - jilly 17:39:54 10/13/99
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- Dark Tower - heather 17:26:51 10/13/99
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- Emerald Palace (for Joe to show that not all rhyming sucks) - heather 17:24:24 10/13/99
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- Balancing Act (my first attempt at villanelle) - doreen peri 17:09:36 10/13/99
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- My Sarong - Angela Sterling 14:52:45 10/13/99
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- Direction (This time, please respond) - Adam 13:03:26 10/13/99
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- Dear Gods, Saints, and Assorted Apostles - Elsa 09:49:34 10/13/99
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- The Dirty "O"--Or, A Symbolic Ode to French Fries - Fiona 07:23:50 10/13/99
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- Won-Ton Soup - Angela Sterling 07:13:19 10/13/99
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- What I Would Not Give (of love with a bit of advice for all) - ~affy~ 06:02:50 10/13/99
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- Bob Waxes Biblical, While I wax Biological - jupiter 00:37:09 10/13/99
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- I guess their going to make 69 longer - El Bonyo 23:10:15 10/12/99
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- Ice Age - Marcus Aurelius 23:03:05 10/12/99
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- slowly approaching the center... - --rm-- 23:00:39 10/12/99
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- rise from ashes - Ana Ng 19:48:27 10/12/99
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- putting down shields - Ana Ng 19:40:26 10/12/99
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- endless days - Ana Ng 19:38:23 10/12/99
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- the cycle of regret - Ana Ng 19:35:30 10/12/99
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- On Scottish Gentlemen - Soleil 19:02:26 10/12/99
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- Temporary Winter - --who needs to know already does-- 18:31:23 10/12/99
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- Embers - Barclay Neal 17:46:52 10/12/99
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- Off The Shelves, The Closet Door Is Open - Kirsys 15:15:20 10/12/99
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- Untitled (for your ears alone) - Cora 14:34:53 10/12/99
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- ReTurning - Cora 14:17:14 10/12/99
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- Yeah, Go to Hell - Elsa 14:08:18 10/12/99
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- Sensual Eroticism - Angela Sterling 13:56:14 10/12/99
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- A Tourist Attraction (for all the country folks out there) - Scott Roth 13:45:19 10/12/99
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- THE MUSIC - Scott Roth 13:40:56 10/12/99
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- The End of a Species - Wendy 12:47:10 10/12/99
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- A Child Of Man (kind of a rough draft) - Shereamore rath 12:44:51 10/12/99
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- The only Truths - Jada the fish 12:34:49 10/12/99
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- Bigger Bangs - jilly 11:33:53 10/12/99
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- THE EXTERNAL - clay miller 08:57:09 10/12/99
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- A Collection Of Poems By The Greatest Poet Ever To Be In A Band Obsessed With Horror Movies - rastas 07:50:04 10/12/99
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- Pot Heads are by nature to Mellow to Star in Works of Full-Length Fiction - Fiona 07:33:55 10/12/99
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- What I know to be true - Jennifer 07:09:32 10/12/99
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- LOVE’S DEMISE - clay miller 06:51:00 10/12/99
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- ESRAS POEM - clay miller 06:44:33 10/12/99
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- NEW YORK "72" - clay miller 06:32:07 10/12/99
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- Intellectual Feast - Floyd Wilde 23:25:11 10/11/99
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- slipping - --rm-- 22:37:51 10/11/99
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- Mad Scientist Rapist Prep (or, Burning Black Love) - rastas 21:52:01 10/11/99
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- Trigger Slut - rastas 21:42:05 10/11/99
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- Way of... - rastas 21:38:19 10/11/99
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- Clumsy Cigarette - rastas 21:34:52 10/11/99
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- 2w=r - rastas 21:30:55 10/11/99
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- The Aftermath - Rose Losey 21:30:52 10/11/99
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- Jilm's Neighbors - El Bonyo 21:22:14 10/11/99
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- Tentative Frienship - Rose Losey 21:10:23 10/11/99
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- Vampire of My Heart - Robin Ann 20:10:47 10/11/99
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- The Matchbox - amanda 18:52:59 10/11/99
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- Forgive me Father - N.C. 18:30:43 10/11/99
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- Contentment of the Child - Princezz 15:47:11 10/11/99
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- Eddie's Song (or, Wonderfully Made) - Squirrel (some constructive comments, please) 14:18:10 10/11/99
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- On leaving the River Shannon - You think I'd know better already..... 12:36:15 10/11/99
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- Dancing In the Streets Without My Mask On - Fiona 11:48:26 10/11/99
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- Realization - Josh K 08:29:14 10/11/99
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- #3 (ANOTHER POEM) - clay miller 07:44:20 10/11/99
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- THE FACELESS - clay miller 07:29:41 10/11/99
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- CYLOPHYAN CITY - clay miller 07:23:26 10/11/99
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- thom and todd (this will be reworked later) - jupiter 01:00:44 10/11/99
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- No home know some one with a computer - Dope Soap 00:29:28 10/11/99
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- spitting pope - jupiter 23:23:17 10/10/99
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- HELP! its rough and i have no idea what to call it - Polly 23:15:57 10/10/99
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- The Orifices of Swerving Mercy - Bob 18:23:29 10/10/99
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- Somehow I Expected It... - Lynzi Marie 16:15:43 10/10/99
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- I Only Want (rewritten, but still not great) - Cora 14:32:26 10/10/99
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- Cousins - Cora 14:30:06 10/10/99
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- Blue (rewritten repost) - Cora 14:24:09 10/10/99
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- The Laughter of the Loon - Nan 13:05:49 10/10/99
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- janice whom i've never met (she sleeps in the yard, her brother's a vet) - jupiter 01:24:52 10/10/99
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- I am sitting somewhere else a division of spirit - Miriam 01:13:22 10/10/99
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- something about not wanting to speak -or- the way we put things together ( ?) - jupiter 01:04:41 10/10/99
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- The sink (revised) - Lydia 20:45:27 10/09/99
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- EVERYTHINGS ON THE DOOR - clay miller 19:47:05 10/09/99
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- Unstable As Willing - Soleil 16:27:57 10/09/99
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- Angel's Wear Your Smile - Soleil 15:51:38 10/09/99
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- maybe one day in the not too distant past - shamanufactor 15:30:30 10/09/99
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- PLEASE READ AND COMMENT - Lydia 14:09:38 10/09/99
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- Neonascent - Wendy 14:06:11 10/09/99
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- The Underground - lug 12:38:10 10/09/99
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- Backlit - lucy fell 11:59:36 10/09/99
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- untitled (for crazy) - addy 10:17:49 10/09/99
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- Journey Endlessly - ~affy~ 07:59:48 10/09/99
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- she was mine - ross mccauley 05:06:02 10/09/99
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- two dolphins dancing - ross mccauley 04:57:57 10/09/99
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- A MONTH OF SUNDAYS - gus 01:41:13 10/09/99
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- unkindest - --rm-- 01:04:19 10/09/99
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- Celtic Solstice - Condor 21:59:48 10/08/99
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- Another Doomsday - Peter 21:24:16 10/08/99
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- a poem called Corey (greatly revised from the posting of a few hours ago) - Cora 19:31:52 10/08/99
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- A Rose - Cora 19:03:19 10/08/99
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- Blue (an old poem I just discovered and reworked a bit) - Cora 18:57:12 10/08/99
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- You Must Not Speak Now - Kirsys 16:53:23 10/08/99
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- Steve McQueen, King O' Clean - rastas 16:47:19 10/08/99
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- Poem #120 (Pure Shit) - rastas 16:38:00 10/08/99
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- a poem called Corey - Cora 13:39:04 10/08/99
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- I only want - Cora 13:35:35 10/08/99
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- Baby Megs - Rob 10:20:25 10/08/99
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- Moody Blues (repost) - Masked Intruder 09:25:31 10/08/99
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- morning frost on the Bangor streets - Jemima 07:15:13 10/08/99
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- You - Jemima 05:07:56 10/08/99
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- Re: You - Cora 14:23:37 10/08/99
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- Re: You - Wendy 11:12:29 10/08/99
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- Re: You - Mark 08:31:55 10/08/99
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- i am very sorry to take up space here but there are apparently 2 jupiters - jupiter 01:34:20 10/08/99
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- grace - jupiter 23:38:00 10/07/99
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- six years - jupiter 22:56:44 10/07/99
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- THE TRIBAL EPIC, Pt. 1 of 5: The New Beginning of Our World and Rule - rastas 20:24:08 10/07/99
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- A Brief Confession While Standing Under a Street Light on the Brooklyn Bridge - Remember? 19:36:38 10/07/99
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- I HAVE A PROPOSITION FOR EVERYONE, Seriously - rastas 17:38:14 10/07/99
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- THE STORY STAYS THE SAME - clay miller 16:47:59 10/07/99
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- MIRROR IN A WINDOW - estlins friend 16:43:36 10/07/99
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- UNNORMAL NORM - estlins friend 16:40:24 10/07/99
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- "In the Backyard" - Scott Roth 16:26:18 10/07/99
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- For all the virgins out there..."To Give Myself Away"...corrected - Scott Roth 16:23:16 10/07/99
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- For all the virgins out there..."To Give Myself Away" - Scott Roth 16:21:54 10/07/99
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- Direction - Adam 14:07:35 10/07/99
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- Late Night Collision with an Afterglow Asteroid - Jade 13:30:48 10/07/99
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- Kosovo (Where She Wanders) - Fiona 13:29:32 10/07/99
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- No Volvere (I Will Not Return--sorry, another translation) - doean't really matter 13:21:17 10/07/99
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- El Rey (The King--Translation of a Mexican Song) - doesn't really matter 13:12:51 10/07/99
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- Yippie-Ti-Yi-A (Lone Star Beer & Bob Wills Music) - rastas 12:59:18 10/07/99
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- HATE ME - rastas 12:55:27 10/07/99
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- Anarchy - rastas 12:51:05 10/07/99
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- Z - rastas 12:49:10 10/07/99
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- Re: Z - Bob 14:06:34 10/07/99
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- SISTER ELIZABETH (another version I had trashed earlier) - brian long 04:48:23 10/07/99
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- Missing Her/Something I never thought I would do - Christi 02:48:44 10/07/99
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- I saw him walking and something said "follow me" - Butterfly Girl 00:50:10 10/07/99
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- for want of the world (away from the world) - --rm-- 21:38:49 10/06/99
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- establishment of confederation thru compromise - rastas 20:27:32 10/06/99
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- Jesus Is Cumming - rastas 20:04:52 10/06/99
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- The Shea Shore - rastas 19:59:48 10/06/99
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- In The Upper-Corner - rastas 19:57:12 10/06/99
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- South Chicago(not a travelogue) - Soleil 17:43:28 10/06/99
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- walk in sunshine (does this title work?) - Polly 15:00:13 10/06/99
(4)
- Sorrows - Shilou 14:03:13 10/06/99
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- Flu (a repost :)) - Wendy 13:29:54 10/06/99
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- restaurant conversation - gus 13:07:15 10/06/99
(0)
- THE BIRD OUTSIDE MY WINDOW (haiku) - brian long 05:36:45 10/06/99
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- How/Fortunate/How - ar 03:18:55 10/06/99
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- forty thousand - jupiter 23:39:39 10/05/99
(4)
- the liberation of nazi concentration camps - gus 23:12:12 10/05/99
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- saturn - soulvamp 22:32:04 10/05/99
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- (any ideas for a title? I was thinking just "fall") - Polly 22:29:01 10/05/99
(10)
- Of Different Lives - Condor 22:08:37 10/05/99
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- Cosmic Cycles - Condor 21:29:44 10/05/99
(5)
- Seconds Later... - rastas 21:24:23 10/05/99
(1)
- She Slipped - Trevor 21:20:09 10/05/99
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- Incinerate: No Time to Flash - rastas 21:17:37 10/05/99
(4)
- Thoughts on Vandalism - rastas 21:12:14 10/05/99
(3)
- This Thing Called Progress - clay miller 20:29:55 10/05/99
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- JUST A SHADOW IN TIME - Estlins friend 20:23:54 10/05/99
(0)
- Spelling - Ziniyopa sorry about spelling in forest trails 20:10:51 10/05/99
(0)
- And... - Ryan 19:50:28 10/05/99
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- Forest trails, then paths,then market roads, and noe a highway - Ziniyopa 19:49:36 10/05/99
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- I am no poet (have drafted since last posting) - Darien Vincent 19:09:24 10/05/99
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- Untitled - amanda 18:39:06 10/05/99
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- Final Montage - amanda 18:35:19 10/05/99
(0)
- A Gentle Feather - Tony Yarolimek 18:32:52 10/05/99
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- Betrayal (draft)Disregard first posting - Soleil 17:24:43 10/05/99
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- Betrayal (draft) - Soleil 17:22:16 10/05/99
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- SISTER ELIZABETH - brian long 17:21:16 10/05/99
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- "Dear Diary" - Scott Roth 16:06:52 10/05/99
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- "THE OTHER ME" (ever wonder if your mirrored image has a life of its own) - Scott Roth 16:03:38 10/05/99
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- A Peace - Cora 15:57:07 10/05/99
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- Bombardment - Jade 13:02:05 10/05/99
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- Child - Icthys Identified 11:50:43 10/05/99
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- Tanzania - Migraine 11:49:16 10/05/99
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- red dress black heart - James Bowie 07:51:39 10/05/99
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- Final Whisper (a poem of truth) - ~affy~ 07:16:04 10/05/99
(2)
- night you flew - ross mccauley 04:31:04 10/05/99
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- retarded - jupiter 03:25:36 10/05/99
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- Beyond the Womb - tangerine souls 18:54:06 10/04/99
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- I need some help with the title for this one, can't think of one, maybe you guys could suggest something. - Kirsys 18:34:18 10/04/99
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- please help!!! - Peter 18:21:58 10/04/99
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- Child of the Moon (draft) - Soleil 18:07:01 10/04/99
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- Collecting Mary Kate - Soleil 17:39:09 10/04/99
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- For Here Or To Go - Soleil 17:07:26 10/04/99
(3)
- Bitter Perhaps Better - OBLIVION 15:32:16 10/04/99
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- Something In The Air - Condor 14:11:51 10/04/99
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- Something In The Air - Condor 14:03:52 10/04/99
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- charlie rahway - plaster of paris 13:51:48 10/04/99
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- new hot madonna - Eva Paoen 13:40:05 10/04/99
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- "ESP" - Donald Windrom 13:36:45 10/04/99
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- Re: "ESP" - damien thorn 13:42:05 10/04/99
(0)
- "wings" - Donald Windrom 13:21:48 10/04/99
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- "no place to eat" - Donald Windrom 13:09:50 10/04/99
(2)
- Neurosis in Roses (repost)Better? Worse? Neither? - lug 10:04:40 10/04/99
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- Freak Show - ~affy~ 09:49:29 10/04/99
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- Paved In Gold - ~affy~ 09:32:09 10/04/99
(2)
- Can't think of one--Me? - Savannah Ogle 06:39:10 10/04/99
(3)
- Writing in a very small notebook - Miriam 04:38:01 10/04/99
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- PROSE POEM - Bob 02:17:16 10/04/99
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- Untitled - drugg 00:58:33 10/04/99
(5)
- Vision of the Great Circle through Sage Smoke - Ziniyopa 00:36:07 10/04/99
(3)
- Vision of the Great Circle through Sage Smoke - Ziniyopa 00:33:38 10/04/99
(2)
- Remembering A Dessert Rain - Japk 20:42:48 10/03/99
(1)
- YOUR NAME - Ross 19:09:56 10/03/99
(1)
- Simple-Colored Bird (rewrite) - Marq 18:29:30 10/03/99
(1)
- Venus (I Feel) - sweetpoison 17:35:57 10/03/99
(0)
- Only Winter - N.C. 13:38:52 10/03/99
(0)
- Extract from Dr. Seuss's Self-Deprecating Schitzophrenic Episode. - Marcus 13:20:04 10/03/99
(2)
- Echoes From the Buried City - mkUltra 10:05:49 10/03/99
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- Echoes From the Buried City - mkUltra 08:10:22 10/03/99
(0)
- Bluff Knoll - Dennis Greene 01:12:02 10/03/99
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- the need denied by nature - --rm-- 00:12:21 10/03/99
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- Umbra - Peter 20:39:11 10/02/99
(2)
- Scared - Kasey 19:34:37 10/02/99
(2)
- World Things - Kasey 19:23:10 10/02/99
(1)
- Poolroom Poems - Nick D. 18:34:06 10/02/99
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- untitled (suggestions?) - Auroura 16:01:21 10/02/99
(0)
- The Green Man Visits my Forest Home - Miriam 14:13:34 10/02/99
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- ... - heather 13:17:50 10/02/99
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- Re: ... - Wendy 16:48:16 10/02/99
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- Re: ... - heather 00:12:42 10/03/99
(0)
- Grasping at fruit flies - Japk 12:41:51 10/02/99
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- really - miss m 09:16:51 10/02/99
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- Reflection - N.C. 09:10:11 10/02/99
(2)
- Take The Time - ~aff~ 08:03:22 10/02/99
(0)
- THE CRITIC - brian long 07:12:58 10/02/99
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- A Sewing Basket for October - Miriam 21:00:18 10/01/99
(5)
- This Child Inside Me (I hate hate hate oh love) - Kirsys 20:06:28 10/01/99
(5)
- Tornado, Torent, & Laying on the Grass - rastas 19:20:24 10/01/99
(4)
- Scientific Pondering - rastas 19:16:16 10/01/99
(1)
- Media=Centre - rastas 19:09:52 10/01/99
(1)
- Only Available Here - rastas 19:05:04 10/01/99
(1)
- a fairy tale - Polly 18:13:24 10/01/99
(0)
- Ballast - Wendy 17:39:45 10/01/99
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- Prayer Beads Or Grandma was right - Butterfly girl here again 16:22:50 10/01/99
(3)
- Moving fingers hold one up to the Apollonian - fartholamule 15:47:14 10/01/99
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- burned girl - robin 14:41:48 10/01/99
(4)
- Christ The Prison - rastas 13:03:29 10/01/99
(4)
- For Sale: one 16 year old white male, needs a role model and needs HELP - rastas 12:57:29 10/01/99
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- untitled (suggestions, critiques?) - Polly 12:14:15 10/01/99
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- Untitled (an old one I am editing...title suggestions PLEEASE!! :-) - heather 06:17:39 10/01/99
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- night - blah 05:38:23 10/01/99
(0)
- Peices - Phantom 00:16:43 10/01/99
(2)
- Retrospect - Echo Rhayne 22:28:38 9/30/99
(3)
- HEY GIRL (to kimmy ann) - rastas 21:37:17 9/30/99
(2)
- Sucicide 103: Catagorical Denominations - rastas 21:32:15 9/30/99
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- Anti-Histamine - rastas 21:26:54 9/30/99
(2)
- Legacy - dan...the white house liked it 20:48:02 9/30/99
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- poetess untitled - Nerissa 20:25:23 9/30/99
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- 2nd draft-untitled-help! - Lynzi Marie 20:24:20 9/30/99
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- Once - Lynzi Marie 20:13:15 9/30/99
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- Re: Once - heather 08:06:42 10/01/99
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- watering down (1st draft) - Red Letter 19:38:35 9/30/99
(1)
- Hey, remember this one (from a contest) - Wendy 18:20:12 9/30/99
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- Neurosis in Roses - lug 15:58:17 9/30/99
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- The sink - Lydia 15:08:05 9/30/99
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- Let them die - Lydia 14:59:39 9/30/99
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- For my Father - Sarah 14:14:31 9/30/99
(2)
- friendly backstabs - desperado 13:25:00 9/30/99
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- Seamless - Wendy 12:22:32 9/30/99
(4)
- "THE GO GO GIRLS" - Michele Kalish 11:56:48 9/30/99
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- Onion (revised/expanded to incl. suggestions from Joe) - doreen peri 10:18:50 9/30/99
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- short story (not a poem) - NaroSun 08:59:26 9/30/99
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- To Bathe in Fallen-angel Tears...(and I used the spell checker that Joe suggested!) :}~ - ~affy~ 08:39:32 9/30/99
(3)
- sable tells me to kill children in the snow - Charlie Rahway 07:04:09 9/30/99
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- On the way home - blakdophin 04:14:16 9/30/99
(0)
- untitled (any response, greatly appreciated!) - polly 00:43:31 9/30/99
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- truth - --rm-- 22:06:16 9/29/99
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- fatigue - --rm-- 21:43:17 9/29/99
(3)
- Mountain Water - Ziniyopa 21:42:17 9/29/99
(2)
- Under-titled - Masked Intruder 21:27:23 9/29/99
(4)
- FUCK!!! FUCK!!! FUCK!!! - Trevor 20:20:00 9/29/99
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- Thyme Heals All Wounds - Justin Thyme 19:56:08 9/29/99
(3)
- The Song of a Soldier - India 15:49:39 9/29/99
(3)
- sand - thom 15:44:00 9/29/99
(2)
- The boy and the kid - Scott Roth 15:14:43 9/29/99
(3)
- dhobighat - venkat 13:26:15 9/29/99
(1)
- "untitled" - neil 12:26:07 9/29/99
(2)
- Lost Lake - Miriam 12:12:25 9/29/99
(5)
- Good Intentions Gone Awry - Chuck Pool 09:41:06 9/29/99
(4)
- With Eyes We Use To Have - Japk 09:33:07 9/29/99
(2)
- Granddad Ralph - Jennifer 09:32:27 9/29/99
(1)
- prelude - blakdophin 05:48:50 9/29/99
(4)
- mercury bath - soulvamp 02:15:22 9/29/99
(3)
- Carnival Happiness - Fyre Fli 23:53:31 9/28/99
(2)
- STIGMATA - JNARO- 21:22:15 9/28/99
(3)
- Waterfalls//Untitled - Kasey 21:20:24 9/28/99
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- WONDERAMA.... - JNARO- 21:12:32 9/28/99
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- Willow's Emotion Roadside Stand - Kasey 21:10:43 9/28/99
(2)
- Take 3....That whole Back in the Black of a Child's Closet - Trevor 20:20:15 9/28/99
(2)
- Pretense Breeds Reality - heather 19:50:38 9/28/99
(3)
- Teeth (feel free to tear this up!) - Lynzi Marie 19:12:44 9/28/99
(3)
- A Short (Untitled) Poem - Soleil 18:55:40 9/28/99
(3)
- Over-titled - Masked Intruder 17:21:38 9/28/99
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- Forgotten - Cora 15:31:11 9/28/99
(2)
- Catching - Cora 15:28:39 9/28/99
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- Beth's B's - Cora 15:25:43 9/28/99
(2)
- Don't Bother - Cora 15:22:46 9/28/99
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- I Thought I Knew - Cora 15:19:24 9/28/99
(0)
- Take that love away - Jada the fish 13:15:53 9/28/99
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- Strip me - Jada the fish 13:04:26 9/28/99
(2)
- Virgin Recriminations - Fiona 12:16:30 9/28/99
(1)
- _DownTown - Donald Windrom 10:36:20 9/28/99
(2)
- requiescant - bernard 09:23:51 9/28/99
(1)
- Chained Sonnet (Untitled) - Soleil 08:22:22 9/28/99
(4)
- This is a Drooling Love - Fiona 07:46:30 9/28/99
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- Wabash to Lakeshore - Jade 07:39:29 9/28/99
(2)
- Jumble Sale - bernard 07:16:34 9/28/99
(1)
- alive - Auroura 06:42:58 9/28/99
(0)
- If Death Were A Gentleman - ~affy~ 06:07:26 9/28/99
(3)
- The Gourmand and his Wife (a repost) - Wendy 04:37:39 9/28/99
(4)
- Black Girl (Behind the Southern Grin) - lug 20:25:42 9/27/99
(6)
- Hairdresser Apartment - rastas 20:18:21 9/27/99
(2)
- C-Evil-Ization - rastas 20:13:20 9/27/99
(2)
- Where It Lands, or How I Learned To Stop Worrying And Find A Grave - rastas 20:09:48 9/27/99
(4)
- glass sculpture - Red Letter 20:02:10 9/27/99
(4)
- Pizza My Heart (One last try) - Soleil 19:46:13 9/27/99
(2)
- War - Kasey 19:06:06 9/27/99
(2)
- Re: War - Lynzi Marie 17:45:18 9/28/99
(1)
- Re: War - Kasey 20:27:07 9/28/99
(0)
- Creativity's Rewards - BLACK LACE 18:53:39 9/27/99
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- Saturday's Child - Soleil 18:16:54 9/27/99
(3)
- The Unsung - amanda 16:56:31 9/27/99
(1)
- HOW LOVE WORKS - Scott Roth 15:41:15 9/27/99
(3)
- For Joe (our newest Critic) - *Jenn* The Dreamer 14:33:28 9/27/99
(2)
- Six Days On The Island - Marq 14:24:21 9/27/99
(4)
- Subtle Destroyer (An experiment with free verse...) - Adam 14:20:21 9/27/99
(5)
- inspired - Auroura 13:41:12 9/27/99
(4)
- Hinterland - Wendy 13:13:45 9/27/99
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- Lightning Shears My Youth (Tonatiuh) - Jade 13:02:44 9/27/99
(3)
- Onion - doreen peri 07:45:57 9/27/99
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- Touch Light - doreen peri 06:31:43 9/27/99
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- I be doing some editing....Revision and Retelevised version of a "In the Black at the Back of a Child's Closed Closet Door" - Trevor 23:55:39 9/26/99
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- All the dark windows have closed - Miriam 22:40:08 9/26/99
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- On Being Redundant - Kevypoo 20:47:16 9/26/99
(2)
- Ryan - Kasey 16:59:19 9/26/99
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- Re: Ryan - --rm-- 21:27:06 9/29/99
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- Re: Ryan - Auroura 21:33:15 9/27/99
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- Re: Ryan - Lynzi Marie 19:51:31 9/26/99
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- What you said today, inadvertantly (II) - robin 15:48:25 9/26/99
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- He Is... (Chronicles of Thought, pt. I) - rastas 14:58:53 9/26/99
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- What Is...? (Chronicles of Thought pt.II) - rastas 14:56:43 9/26/99
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- To emily - 12:14:12 9/26/99
(0)
- Attention starved soul - Jada The fish 12:07:06 9/26/99
(0)
- untitled - Polly 12:04:04 9/26/99
(0)
- La, La Land - ONE FLEW OVER 11:48:42 9/26/99
(1)
- The Dark Side Of Joy - Chuck Pool 11:41:04 9/26/99
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- Some things forgotten - Anne 11:40:07 9/26/99
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- Is that my father? - Anne 11:39:23 9/26/99
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- waking - Polly 11:30:12 9/26/99
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- Simple Pleasures - Chuck Pool 10:12:33 9/26/99
(0)
- untitled - N.C. 09:48:08 9/26/99
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- Relentless Rain (draft) ..for reality BOB - Soleil 08:37:26 9/26/99
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- A Drink For the Road (more like lyrics) - Soleil 07:46:43 9/26/99
(0)
- Heavenly Perfection - Adam 07:22:43 9/26/99
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- A waiting time for sacred drums and feathered dreams - ziniyopa 23:05:27 9/25/99
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- WINDS CARESS/ from #32 - Purpledove 23:03:57 9/25/99
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- Raiment - Soleil 21:59:13 9/25/99
(1)
- The Last Kiss Hello - Ez 20:05:45 9/25/99
(1)
- If I Can't Live - Kirsys 19:29:54 9/25/99
(4)
- To The Children Of The World - Kirsys 19:03:48 9/25/99
(2)
- For a Friend - Sarah 13:50:54 9/25/99
(4)
- Hmm I can think of anything that would make a good title for this - amanda 12:39:59 9/25/99
(4)
- volcanic eruption - human nature 12:03:52 9/25/99
(1)
- Soon Into My Grave - Armageddon 10:18:55 9/25/99
(4)
- 1st Day of Fall - rich 09:34:57 9/25/99
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- Leonardo's Lament.... or Life in the 'stute - Justin Thyme 09:27:01 9/25/99
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- A Response to my poem on #32 by Joe...posted it here so that I could respond to his words...sorry if it is a problem - ~affy~ 06:28:14 9/25/99
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- ~Suffering~ - ~affy~ 06:23:43 9/25/99
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- member me? - bernard 01:27:19 9/25/99
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- individuality - --rm-- 23:03:57 9/24/99
(1)
- Pizza My Heart (rewrite of Pizza Parlor Paliminos) for Joe - Soleil 18:13:56 9/24/99
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- Modern Woman - Soleil 18:10:19 9/24/99
(4)
- SALVATION - brian long 17:54:00 9/24/99
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- Words InDeed - Nan 17:30:03 9/24/99
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