Critic Corner #13
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- Friends(The Necrophilliac Story) - Cemetery of Eden 08:54:47 2/19/99
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- "virgin" - Jfreak 23:36:11 2/16/99
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- Last Night - Sarah 15:37:32 2/16/99
(0)
- fluttering around without aim - Ana Ng 15:35:49 2/16/99
(1)
- Reality, please - Oklahoma 05:48:42 2/16/99
(7)
- The day my heart spoke - Spud 22:53:18 2/15/99
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- Apple - Edith 21:32:41 2/15/99
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- me without you (a sappy love poem *sigh* I am hopeless) - Maya 20:42:48 2/15/99
(5)
- Realization - Six 20:42:23 2/15/99
(3)
- Barren - Juliann 19:45:46 2/15/99
(2)
- Razor - Chelle 19:23:10 2/15/99
(1)
- Consuming Ferocity - David Rutledge 19:18:53 2/15/99
(1)
- Nosefratu - Atrocifix 19:11:57 2/15/99
(7)
- Forgive Me Father, For I Have Sinned - Pastorman 19:10:09 2/15/99
(2)
- Dog's Command - Atrocifix 19:02:01 2/15/99
(0)
- looking at a yellow rose - Squirrel 18:43:53 2/15/99
(3)
- Song - jilly 18:21:45 2/15/99
(4)
- Lusting the Ice Moon - Jade 18:01:32 2/15/99
(0)
- And Why Does the Green Polar Bear Speak? - Ryan 17:52:59 2/15/99
(0)
- Why Can't I Find Any Superheroes? - Ryan 17:45:09 2/15/99
(1)
- Why Can't I Walk through the Closed Door? - Ryan 17:42:37 2/15/99
(2)
- THE JUMPER'S EYES (kinda bored and experimenting) - brian long 16:11:30 2/15/99
(7)
- June 1998 - Sarah... 15:40:29 2/15/99
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- Edith (repost) - Jade 15:04:28 2/15/99
(4)
- The Fragility of My Pieces - Oklahoma 14:31:02 2/15/99
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- Madness in the Time of War - Oklahoma 14:20:59 2/15/99
(2)
- Morbid Thoughts at a Cafe on Saint Germain - Oklahoma 14:03:07 2/15/99
(1)
- Crowns - Willy 14:02:19 2/15/99
(1)
- Life's highs - . (c 14:02:13 2/15/99
(0)
- Capital Throne(A Tribute to Bertha) - Atrocifix 13:44:10 2/15/99
(4)
- Nothing Lasts Forever - Melissa E. Winkler 13:16:52 2/15/99
(2)
- Gerbils- the horror - James Bowie 12:33:37 2/15/99
(19)
- I Still Feel Lucky - Ralph 12:26:42 2/15/99
(3)
- Razor - Chelle 12:20:21 2/15/99
(0)
- Lifting Lazarus - Jade 12:05:52 2/15/99
(8)
- reflections - Sarah 11:55:13 2/15/99
(3)
- Life Afterlife - Wendy 08:41:43 2/15/99
(1)
- Do you feel beautiful? - James Bowie 07:58:00 2/15/99
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- Dream Lover - Ruth 06:56:46 2/15/99
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- Heaven's Gate (rewrite) - Tommy Q. 05:20:06 2/15/99
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- February fourteenth (at day's end) - Red Letter 21:35:41 2/14/99
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- Flirting With Inspiration - Angel With a Broken Wing 21:07:13 2/14/99
(3)
- Ode to the Scroll - Ana Ng 18:30:07 2/14/99
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- ~poisoned tongues~ - Maya 17:51:29 2/14/99
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- Spontaneous Combustion - Wendy 16:38:45 2/14/99
(4)
- The Day is Almost Over (A continuation) - Sarah 15:50:04 2/14/99
(2)
- Heaven's Gate - Tommy Q. 13:37:54 2/14/99
(2)
- Sponge - Curtis 12:25:00 2/14/99
(1)
- Determined Youth - Lad in Need 11:58:23 2/14/99
(0)
- A Tear in Love - Cora 11:40:55 2/14/99
(2)
- Pieces of Love - Child's heart 11:40:33 2/14/99
(0)
- In God's Kitchen - Mark Hansfield 11:10:04 2/14/99
(0)
- Gardening(My Vocation in Life) - AngelFace 10:51:40 2/14/99
(0)
- My True Home - LeroyBrown 10:48:49 2/14/99
(2)
- A Sunshine Valentine Triolet (with just a little cheating) - Ron Carnell 10:17:37 2/14/99
(9)
- I Found God Today - Tommy Q. 10:01:00 2/14/99
(4)
- in the spirit of the day, a valentine's sonnet to go with nan's villanelle (anyone up for a triolet?) - jilly 08:41:07 2/14/99
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- AShara8AnaAng'sX - Short BUS 08:37:26 2/14/99
(2)
- Love is special heres my heart - Atrocifix 08:37:14 2/14/99
(7)
- V day mood - Lawn Chair 07:48:48 2/14/99
(1)
- Something for Valentines' Day - E.E.Biller 07:01:34 2/14/99
(0)
- FRIENDS or LOVERS (A Valentine Villanelle) - Nan 06:57:30 2/14/99
(6)
- Three in the Morning (continuation of Two in the Morning) - Sarah (#2) 05:45:32 2/14/99
(2)
- where were we? - bernard 03:34:57 2/14/99
(1)
- Soldier...,You Hide In My Heart...... - Amrutha 00:59:49 2/14/99
(10)
- I LOVE - Atroifixi 00:57:39 2/14/99
(2)
- All My Friends - John McGuinness 00:53:51 2/14/99
(2)
- the convergence of past and future - Ana Ng 00:23:11 2/14/99
(4)
- Two in the Morning (Happy Valentine's Day) - Sarah 00:03:38 2/14/99
(4)
- 'End Of Winter' - Imaginee 22:45:14 2/13/99
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- Dreams comming true - Atroifix 21:43:24 2/13/99
(5)
- Im turning one of my works into a song and I could use some advice for what I have so far. Thanks for anything! - E. S. Rein 21:36:49 2/13/99
(2)
- Santa V - Benedict Pike 21:27:14 2/13/99
(1)
- Powder White - Six 20:02:53 2/13/99
(0)
- For X)Angel(X and Colin - A Friend 19:14:33 2/13/99
(3)
- I'm starting MRAAMLA, wanna join? - John McGuinness 18:21:08 2/13/99
(9)
- as the misty cloud rises - Ana Ng 17:44:33 2/13/99
(1)
- Woman (God's Screenplay) - phillipe 17:31:39 2/13/99
(3)
- Faces of Heaven - Raggedy Annie 17:28:05 2/13/99
(3)
- it happens every time - Ana Ng 17:21:37 2/13/99
(1)
- Self Tribute - Lew Cypher 15:47:16 2/13/99
(6)
- Plaisire d'amoure - Artwolf 14:53:14 2/13/99
(3)
- Once Dead - Atrocifix 14:26:46 2/13/99
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- To Atrocifix - iodine 14:01:50 2/13/99
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- Ahh, Love (How appropriate) - Olivia 13:30:03 2/13/99
(3)
- GYPSY WHALES - brian long 13:26:07 2/13/99
(9)
- To Mother - Bambi Cohen 10:45:34 2/13/99
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- Carpe Diem - Cora 10:11:50 2/13/99
(2)
- A Shakespearean Question to My Reflection - Cora 10:07:42 2/13/99
(5)
- toasty - Ana Ng 09:40:59 2/13/99
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- January 24, 1999 (another one for Jack) - Cora 08:45:18 2/13/99
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- Nothing More - E.E.Biller 08:35:05 2/13/99
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- Mother - cheska 07:09:11 2/13/99
(1)
- Monkey-circus! - Arul Madhavan 51/2yrs KG student, Dubai. 07:03:25 2/13/99
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- PICTURE PERFECT - Amrutha 06:42:50 2/13/99
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- poetry - Amrutha 06:18:00 2/13/99
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- human atom IX - bernard 03:09:23 2/13/99
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- I Love My Friends - Huck Finn 23:56:41 2/12/99
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- A Valentine Song - Atrocifix 22:42:18 2/12/99
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- Monarchy through Bloodshed - Atrocifix 21:50:46 2/12/99
(4)
- Need help on punctuation and title please - xanaveive 20:32:45 2/12/99
(2)
- the apostate's creed - jilly 20:30:24 2/12/99
(3)
- Pares Cum Paribus - Cora 18:54:31 2/12/99
(24)
- Twice Times Ten - Dube /DG 18:26:16 2/12/99
(2)
- Hymnus ad Europam - Atrocifix 17:32:32 2/12/99
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- Coming of Age - Cora 16:44:57 2/12/99
(4)
- [[[Barrio Fiesta]]] needs help from Spanish speakers - A. Brown 16:26:40 2/12/99
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- Aurora (criticism is, of course, welcome) - Ryan 16:05:47 2/12/99
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- Observer of Evil - Atrocifix 15:20:44 2/12/99
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- I melt for flowers - xallanthia 14:44:37 2/12/99
(16)
- Killing Species - Atrocifix 14:22:44 2/12/99
(0)
- Priestly Class - Atrocifix 14:19:07 2/12/99
(6)
- Pick Roses - Cora 14:02:57 2/12/99
(3)
- ~*A Letter Never Meant to be Sent*~ ("I just wanted to tell you") - Raggedy Annie 14:01:40 2/12/99
(2)
- My Husband - Tricia 13:58:20 2/12/99
(2)
- Donor Valentine - Wendy 12:13:55 2/12/99
(7)
- Oh, to be a Camel cigarette - Neptune 11:17:32 2/12/99
(6)
- handwriting - metrixx 08:28:28 2/12/99
(2)
- "buns" - Donald Windrom 07:17:11 2/12/99
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- "poplife" - Donald Windrom 07:06:40 2/12/99
(1)
- "The Death of A Poet Don Killuminati(1966-1999) - Donald Windrom 06:58:28 2/12/99
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- I LOVE HIM - SJW 06:15:27 2/12/99
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- you are so good for me---i think - Chiquita 22:25:30 2/11/99
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- Killing Species - Abysser 21:17:15 2/11/99
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- Just a quick note to say... - JP 21:10:05 2/11/99
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- Moramay - phillipe 20:19:44 2/11/99
(1)
- Why must I be tortured? - Woolus 19:14:28 2/11/99
(1)
- Haiku Adeui - Chocolate Bunny 19:13:43 2/11/99
(4)
- Blue Lunatic - i.b.emma 19:08:00 2/11/99
(1)
- Help me with my Pain - CrossedBuns 18:58:39 2/11/99
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- "COMPASS